can you review this articles usefulness

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    Bismark, May 20, 2010 IP
  2. azis777

    azis777 Peon

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    #2
    way too short. not very professional.
     
    azis777, May 21, 2010 IP
  3. Serious Workers

    Serious Workers Well-Known Member

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    The article is way too short, I don't like it.
     
    Serious Workers, May 21, 2010 IP
  4. jesi

    jesi Active Member

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    #4
    just make it more professional as it should be
     
    jesi, May 21, 2010 IP
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    #5
    There are some grammatical errors in there such as:

    And to move the bill to a final vote.
    Monday after it's recess..
    A major Democrats setback was cleared Saturday when. Democratic

    And yes, it's too short and lacks substance.
     
    DesignChic, May 21, 2010 IP