Can You Review My Website

Discussion in 'Websites' started by cjbmeb14, Feb 4, 2012.

  1. #1
    I run an article writing service and have a website
    www.d1el.com
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    Can you take a look and see if I have got the layout right.
     
    cjbmeb14, Feb 4, 2012 IP
  2. mshmethu

    mshmethu Member

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    simply good!
     
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    #3
    your site having nice theme and very nice design...
     
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    HPDesigns Greenhorn

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  5. cjbmeb14

    cjbmeb14 Member

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    Thankyou all for looking at my website, it is good to have unbiased opinions.
    I will take on board what has been said about the header.
     
    cjbmeb14, Feb 4, 2012 IP
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    CHWUHosting.com Peon

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    #6
    Top left shows " /> should get that fix soon.
     
    CHWUHosting.com, Feb 5, 2012 IP
  7. cjbmeb14

    cjbmeb14 Member

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    #7
    Thanks for pointing that out but I do not know what it is?
     
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    Nice online store. I think you should use your site title on web page because i am not see the name of your site in web page. but overall nice website.
     
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  9. cjbmeb14

    cjbmeb14 Member

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    #9
    I have listened to all the comments and have now changed the header to d1el.com
    take a look and see if it looks better.
    Thanks.
     
    cjbmeb14, Feb 5, 2012 IP
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    To be honest, i think the overall aspect is a bit rudimentary, considering the subject of the website. If i'm not mistaking, you are going to sell online content (articles) for (serious) customers worldwide. Given this fact, you should first of all change the website menu, because it resembles almost perfectly the Apple.com's website menu. Not only you might encounter some sort of legal problem if they find out, the menu doesn't really help your design, either.

    The overall aspect of the theme is simple, 2D-ish. That menu has the typical Apple 3D aspect to it, so they don't really go nice together.
    Leaving aside the layout, i think you should proofread the content of your website. After speed reading your ads, i have to say there are a couple of mistakes that would discourage customers from buying your writing.

    i hope i didn't ruin it for you, but if you're really looking forward to getting money from your website, you need to improve it.
     
    apathykills, Feb 5, 2012 IP
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    After receiving the above comments I decided to change the whole website around again.
    Please take a look and tell me what you think of it now.
    Thanks.
     
    cjbmeb14, Feb 19, 2012 IP
  12. explainstuff

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    #12
    Nice. It's just a personal preference but I don't like seeing website that are so glaring... I think users don't like to see gaudy websites. If I were you I would make it uch simpler... may be with less items on the landing page.... but its just me.
     
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    Simply nice.....
     
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    #14
    Thanks for your honest review.
    It did actually tone it down to what it was before.
     
    cjbmeb14, Feb 19, 2012 IP
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    I like the layout, you did a good job. Did you do the graphics, I would probably have a nice logo and banner made when you get a chance.
     
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    #16
    Yes I did do the graphics.
     
    cjbmeb14, Feb 19, 2012 IP
  17. prettypinkpetals

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    They are good for doing them yourself, it just shows. It's okay though, I still like the site over all.
     
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    #18
    good domain name, how much money of your buying
     
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    great design bro
     
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    #20
    not too bad,.. i think it's good. keep spirit
     
    imcutegirl, Feb 20, 2012 IP