I have finally finished my site selling landing pages that I will design and create, I have only got one on at the moment as I've been spending my time on the actual site. I would love some feedback of what you all think, if you are interested in buying that landing page on there let me know and I will sort a heavy discount for fellow DP'ers Be sure to bookmark it and check back often EDIT - it helps if I include the url www.lpcreations.com Thanks Richard
it doesn't looks good in Requests and Customisations pages. Pls check that out. FYI, i'm using mozilla firefox.
fieldset code wasn't good rendered in Opera browser. Image header also disorganized very well. You sell graphics design will be better if your design has more attractive. IMHO, over all your design is usual.
Cheers, I've just checked on firefox and the"requests" and "customisations" pages are totally messed up, I will try and fix that now. EDIT- I believe I have corrected the errors in firefox on those 2 pages. Would love more feedback from you all.
While I like the health beauty page the image of the woman really looks so heavilly retouched it isn't believable to me. The other thing is, I would flop the face so that the non wrinkled side is on the left. People look from left to right and the wrinkled retouched face reads first and could put people off. I was an art director for a very long time and this is the kind of thing did. Little things like that can make a big diff. People don't always know what disturbs them but it does and they turn away when they are disturbed.
The web layout needs to retouch again. Overall it's too plain. And on the affiliates page there's a red bar while on the other page / the rest of the page there's no red bar.I think that is something not quite right. Header needs to retouch.
Basically, everything is ok now. Get ready to promote your site. Get more visitors and do further touch-ups later.
I'll have a think and a play around with the colour scheme and try make it look more professional If you mean adding more landing pages I will be doing that shortly, just need to get them designed and coded.
Thanks everyone for your feedback, I will try to think of a better colour scheme as everyone is mentioning that. Still at 0 sales so far, I need to try and come up with more designs so people have more to choose from.