I have created a landing page copy and wanted a fair review by experts here. It's related to online training for a software. Let me know if you're ready to help. I "ll send you the link over PM. Thanks!
If you're willing to let the review be seen here to help others, I'll be happy to do a quick critique. I don't have a name here, but I'm fairly known outside of this forum and feel confident I can help.
It's a public forum for the benefit of all. Why the secrecy? Just post the link. Take out the "http://www" if you don't want it indexed.