I would like to know your opinion... I have 2 html pages : http://www.buy-niche-articles.com http://www.buy-niche-articles.com/index2.html (OLD version, not being used but heard good things about it !) I would like to know what you think of them. * Which one should I keep ? * Should I mix them ? * What do you like ? * What should I ADD ? * What should I REMOVE ? * Spelling mistakes ? * HOW can I convince you if you want this product ? Let me know please... I really are doing my best... I will give you a BIG discount, if you want to join. For a honest / good review you could join for $18 => $19 off the normal price ! This is to motivate a lot of members to help me out and as a THANK YOU ! Note : I will reduce number of members from 200 to 30. Fair and concentrating on small LOYAL members.
Here's my impressions: - I think the header graphic puts me off - crayons always remind me of drawing when I was little. A pen graphic would be better. -There's too much page before anyone reaches the details of what the site is about. - I prefer the first page listed, but think you should state the exact number of articles people get per month in the headline e.g. "20 Exclusive Quality Niche Articles Every Month", remove the "These Niche Packages are Exclusive to my Members" and keep the number of members it's limited to. - The samples are a good idea - it lets people know what they're buying. Good luck! Emma
From a design perspective, I would leave the site. There's nothing that sets it apart from any other site. Main issues with the site: 1) What do crayons and colored pencils have to do with the site? 2) The header is incohesive. You have crayons and colored pencils on the left in a glob, an interwined "rope" graphic above a faded ruler, icons at the top that don't fit, and a paper clip floating in the center. 3) The navigation bar and graphics don't fit with the header. 4) You have various fonts all across the page which make it difficult to read, don't flow well and make the site incohesive. I like the idea of the site and what you sell, but, being a professional designer, I wouldn't purchase your prodcut because you didn't spend the time or money to make the site more professional. Sorry, I'm just being honest. Good luck.
For the left images, they look highly unprofessional, I would replace it with high quality stock photographs of pens / paper. try sxc.hu for some
Ok... I will have to let redesign the COMPLETE header including the menu on it ! That is what I thought, crayons / pencils nothing to do with articles... ouch !!! Ok... I removed that sentence ! I will maybe remove some sentences in the beginning... I am thinking of putting one or two paragraphs at the end (with that style) Thanks Emma... I really appreciate it !
Ok.. Like already wrote... I will let rewrite the complete header + menu so that it matches the rest of my page ! (double confirmation lol) About different fonts... do you mean the testimonal ? I think that was the only one different.. I thought to do so, so people SEE the difference... but apparantly no good idea ;-) Woow never thought about that... this version is already much better than previous one, but needs still work ;-) Many thanks.... I want always honest opinions ! I love that, even if it isn't good.. so I learn from it...
I have found some images... but I am thinking... * Keyword research... the icon of Keyword locator ? or the image I have with a list and checks ? ;-) * Forum.. should I make a small image of my phpbb forum and put that in front of "Forum" ? * Support : a bit difficult to match this one BTW... Do you want to take that offer of me ? It is up to you. BUT thanks for your comments !!!!
I would advice you to use the first one but do the following.... 1. Get rid of header as everyone else is saying... Not Nice 2. While your doing that change the links... 3. Use the start of the index.html site... [CENTER] "20 Quality Niche Articles Every Month... Limited to Only 200 members... JOIN NOW and SECURE your position on our membership roster. BEFORE IT’S TOO LATE! "[/CENTER] Code (markup): ..but change the font, make it thicker and larger. look at one of my sites for font size ( http://www.ebooks4u.eu ). Needs to stand out and incourage the viewer to read on. This is the most important part of your site. Even use different matching colors for each line... 4. With the main content under "Dear Content Marketeer" do the following take the underlines away from the commas and spaces. Separate the underlined words. 5. Now as for all your pictures with your samples. Change them all, get pictures related to each sample. 6. Look at my site again under "Dear Fellow Internet Wealth Seeker ..." and see how i use the eBook, and the text under it... Setup your samples to look like this... 2 Unique Niche Packages Each Month ! ------ You own all rights to the niche articles | | made available to member seach month. | | That means you can display these articles | | where you choose, and even alter them if ------ you wish. Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Bla Sample 1 : ------ You own all rights to the niche articles | | made available to member seach month. | | That means you can display these articles | | where you choose, and even alter them if ------ and so on.... Code (markup): All your doing is using TABLES to there full potential and improving your site. 7. Last few things... just clean up the rest of your text and pictures. Put a gap between "CLick here to join now" and text. Put your satisfaction picture on a line on its own and just match up the rest of the text.
I was pleased to see your website with so many good services that you offer.Secondly, I must sate that you may try changing the picture of those pencils, located on the top side of the main page. Perhaps, you could fix another apprpriate picture.
I was pleased to see your website with so many good services that you offer.Secondly, I must sate that you may try changing the picture of those pencils, located on the top side of the main page. Perhaps, you could fix another appropriate picture of your own suitable choice.
Wildhalf... Point 1 + 2 : to do by a professional webdesigner ! Point 3 + 4 : done (YES!) Point 5 : http://www.buy-niche-articles.com/small/ all have height of 90 (no fix width though) Point 6 : to do with choices of point 5 Point 7 : to do Till now http://www.buy-niche-articles.com/index3.html Let me know if I am doing right please ;-) Thanks a lot...
Meanwhile I have continued to improve it ! I really like it now already ;-) Point 5 : Done (YES!) Point 6 : Done Point 7 : Done Still to do, points : 1. Get rid of header as everyone else is saying... Not Nice 2. While your doing that change the links... Till now http://www.buy-niche-articles.com/index3.html Thanks a lot !!!!!!