can you review my blog...?

dear, friends :

I have made a blog yesterday, that is about making money. I want to someone review my site or maybe give me some advices?

your advce is important to me, and I Appreciated your voice.

thank you.

http://4-makemoney.blogspot.com

 

Ive just set up a money related blog yesterday also

However, i decided to buy a domain from the word go and throw Wordpress up on there. You can get a domain for like $7 these days, id say its worth it in the long run, and you might as well do it at the start so you don't have any issues come later down the line.

Also it doesn't look good when a money making site is been run off a free domain/hosting but thats just my opinion, please dont bite my head off!! haha

I think your blog needs a little bit more color...i dont know what you can do with blogger blogs but maybe try coloring one of your columns to seperate the text and make it easier on the eyes

Also, if you have your blog link in your sig, why dont you throw your RSS feed link into your profile here... wont hurt.

Hope to be of some help

Jord

 

Why not change the theme? But of course, content still matters the most.

 

Looks good, maybe space out the paragraphs some? All the text seems to be jumbled up, other then that its looking good.

 

do you have options for themes with blogger? site looks a bit bland

 

I'd lose the calendar (anyone can look in their toolbar and get the same info) and put an RSS feed there instead. Also, I'd work on the grammar a bit.

 

thank you for advices.

 

i would also have to say to remove the calendar....

 

change the theme dude :s tis theme are not atratcife and sad :s

 

Hey there, I like the open layout but I agree that the grammar and structure could use a little work. I have a blog on pretty much the same topic and I always justify the full text and leave a line between paragraphs. Just keep working on it and don't publish your posts until you've checked over them, but I think you're doing pretty good!