Ok I am new to all of this and I have been working on my site slowly (just starting 1st article lol!) So I am still getting into the groove of SEO monetizing and using keywords. So this is my first article I am wondering if you can tell me if it should be longer, more keywords, etc.. just so I can get a wider picture of where I went wrong/what I could do better on this article and the next ones. http://beijing expat DOT com/beijing/attractions-2/badachu-park/ The article is about Badachu Park which is located in Beijing.
Do you mean here - http://www.topbeijingtravel.com/beijing-attractions/beijing-parks-sites/ if so - well done, succinct and easily read, remember not to put a comma before you continue a sentence with 'and' as you have on the first line. Great site though