Can you look at my 'Downsize Dave' blog please?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by neforum, Feb 19, 2008.

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    I've decided to embark on a journey into weightloss land this year and hope to lose 42lbs in 2008. To document this, i've started a blog, 'Downsize Dave'. Can you please take a look and see what you think?

    http://downsizedave.blogspot.com

    Thanks,

    Dave
     
    neforum, Feb 19, 2008 IP
  2. GlueStick

    GlueStick Peon

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    I think you've got some great content, but can you put more posts on your start page? I think most visitors would prefer to see more than two posts on your start page and may not want to click on your archives page to read further. I think you're a great writer and I thought your post about Pizza Hut was very compelling, but I think you need to have more posts showing on your start page.

    Also, I would suggest making your weight chart smaller, or even moving it off the top of your page entirely. It is a good idea, its just a bit too much to show up on the top of each page, imo. You're a good writer, and I'd much rather see your blog content before I see your weight chart.


    (Parenthetically: A USB scale? I never would've imagined such a thing existed, but now I want one for myself.)
     
    GlueStick, Feb 19, 2008 IP
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    dvdAuction Banned

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    maybe remove the chart.. for your post seen first and not your chart..
    the readers are more interested to read your post and not to see your chart..
     
    dvdAuction, Feb 19, 2008 IP
  4. neforum

    neforum Active Member

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    Thanks guys, i've done as you suggested and now list 5 posts per page, with the chart now moved to the bottom of the page instead of the top. I'll have to give the ads time to focus again though.

    Those scales are something else aren't they GlueStick ?
     
    neforum, Feb 25, 2008 IP