Can you improve this radio advert script?

I need help improving this script before it goes on the radio. It's going onto the drive time show on a local urban radio station that should reach business owners in the area.

It also needs shortening and probably should mention SEO and eCommerce as those are areas that the company is getting most enquiries for at the moment.

Business owners! With <DOMAIN.COM> you don't need to know how to build websites to make money online.

If you already have a website <DOMAIN.COM> can help you reach the top of the search engines and increase your sales - fast!

<DOMAIN.COM> is Google Certified with 15 years experience helping online businesses succeed.

To find out how <DOMAIN.COM> can help your company call <PHONE NUMBER>, that's <PHONE NUMBER> or enquire online at <WWW.DOMAIN.COM> now.

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I would change that "to find out how" part to a more action orientated phrase to encourage people to act. like "Find out how today at "
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Thats good. Keep them coming. I know this ad can be a lot better!

 

I took the liberty to modify some phrases.

http://playaudio-345.com/play.asp?m=513608&f=QNDGZQ&ps=6&p=1


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That's brilliant Chuck! I hope the station make as good a job at it as you have.