Can you help me improve my landing page?

Discussion in 'General Marketing' started by zenman, Sep 23, 2009.

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    I am looking for some free advice on how I might improve my conversions with a new mini landing page site I created. I am running some ppc for it over the last month, but it is not getting much action. Was hoping you guys could give me some insight for improvements. The site can be found here: www.netcatapult.com

    Thanks!
     
    zenman, Sep 23, 2009 IP
  2. Skye

    Skye Member

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    First you need to get your site cached.
     
    Skye, Sep 23, 2009 IP
  3. zenman

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    thanks sky...it is actually more of a test site so we just wanted to see what kind of response it gets with PPC.
     
    zenman, Sep 23, 2009 IP
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    Hi,

    in my experience there is too much choice there. List the benefits of the offer, get a pop up for the email address and stick a big button in the middle that they can click on the get through to the next page.

    If you are going to pay PPC to get people there it must JUMP off the page what they need to do to get your brilliant, fantastic and amazing offer which is just incredible value they would be MAD to not sign up right noww.......

    I hope you see where I am coming from, I think the page is FARRRRRRRRRRRR to conservative and laid back without any real benefits getting the visitor of their lazy butts and motivated into action............

    If you put: Sign up here to get onto google more quickly, build your business in half the time and make more cans than ever.........it would be more up my street.

    Just my thoughts,

    Dave
     
    Davally, Sep 23, 2009 IP
  5. zenman

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    Yeah I know what your saying about conservative... i guess it depends on the target market. I want to come off as a professional company that can be trusted but I think it can be spruced up. thanks i really appreciate your input
     
    zenman, Sep 25, 2009 IP