Before I say anything I feel I must say this is not an attempt at advertising (I know people will say it is but I am new to blogging and simply want some good honest Feedback) The site is www.newbmarketing.com and what I really want analyzed is my style of writing. Is it good/bad/ugly and what can I do to improve it? Best Regards, Jared.
Hey, Check the bottom link in my sig and I'll give you a detailed analysis over an instant messenger.
just my honest opinion: what is your blog supposed to be about? i guess helping newbs market... so why would you bring it back apologizing? you are a business owner i dont really think you need to apologize, especially since it looks like you only had one entry before this one! not like yahoo was down for 4 months.. (no offense) 2nd, i would change the blue background... just go with a more professional pure white look ala yahoo or myspace.. 3rd, you had a couple mispelled words in the first 3 sentences, so i would definitely spell check with microsoft word or something before posting... 4th, i do like the domain name, but i wouldnt point them to another resource, especially not digital point ( i saw link in ur first post)... thats like espn having an article and pointing someone to sportsillustrated.com! if they come to digital point they might never go back to your site! (just my opinion) as far as the actuall content you have, i cant really judge because your whole post was about apologizing, which im sure is not what you will talk about in the future.. make a post regarding some stuff related to your audience and then we can judge your content. hope i helped!
Woahdolla: Honest opinion is greatly appreciated, Will go over the suggestions you made and make some changes - You made some very valid points.
Post it in Website Reviews section so that you won't get infraction and get a lot of advice related to your website and writing... I am not good in writing myself so no commment.
I am not sure about your writing but blue and white lines in background is hard for eyes. Change background, please!
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Putting a huge glaring spelling mistake in the TITLE of your blog post makes a very very bad impression.