Can someone please review my "Triple Play" Money Making Website?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by sd1, Oct 5, 2009.

0
  1. #1
    I'm over 80% done with my first website. It's called the "The Triple Play" Money Making Website that's three sites wrapped into one. It's an Automated Clickbank Store, Ebook Store, plus a Free Article section with 6,300 preloaded articles and it's all combined into One EASY Website! Please tell me what you think.

    Thanks in advance!

    sd1

    Sales Page http://www.yourhotdeals2.net/tripleplay1

    Website Demo http://www.yourhotdeals2.net/demo1
     
    sd1, Oct 5, 2009 IP
  2. PPCAG

    PPCAG Member

    Messages:
    99
    Likes Received:
    1
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    45
    #2
    design does not look good for me :(
     
    PPCAG, Oct 5, 2009 IP
  3. rtp06

    rtp06 Peon

    Messages:
    214
    Likes Received:
    2
    Best Answers:
    0
    Trophy Points:
    0
    #3
    The design is too simple. Also, I would remove the word "buy" from the top. Use maybe "Get" or "Own"
     
    rtp06, Oct 5, 2009 IP