Can someone please review my site

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by maka1111, Sep 26, 2008.

  1. #1
    Please, everyone, look at my site and tell what I need to do to it and how I can make it better so people will come and click on some links. I am so new at this and am still trying to learn everything. It is mainly supposed to be a review site that people can get information on and maybe click on a few links. I really need help. link is in my sig.
    Thank you to everyone
     
    maka1111, Sep 26, 2008 IP
  2. vansterdam

    vansterdam Notable Member

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    First of all...you will want to use a better page title than just how2makemoneyonlinenow.com. You'll want your important keywords in the title.

    You could probably chose a better font for your content too. The font in the bottom content is fine, but the font in the top half is too small to comfortably read.

    Other than that, you probably just need to work at getting more links on a regular basis. Make some kind of plan to get a certain amount of links each week and stick to it. Over time, those links will build into some decent traffic and search engine rankings.

    Try reading some beginner seo tutorials to get started in that direction.
     
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  3. kingofsanda

    kingofsanda Peon

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    #3
    vansterdam is right about the title of your page, you should have a few important
    keywords in your title. You should change the color of your adsense ads to make it
    blend in with the theme of your site.
     
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  4. maka1111

    maka1111 Peon

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    #4
    other then that I am on the right track?
    Thank you
     
    maka1111, Sep 26, 2008 IP
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    lycos Well-Known Member

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    You need more content and update it regularly. Conduct keyword research and optimize your content based on it in order to increase traffic. Try to use an image to complement every post so that it doesn't look dull and then work on the ads placement by trying out different combination to get the best ctr.
     
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    javaongsan Well-Known Member

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    It looks pretty messy at first, you showing too much. colors are not attractive and font is a bit too small.
    If you want it to be blog, make sure the archives are easily navigated.
     
    javaongsan, Sep 26, 2008 IP
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    Ecreation Active Member

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    #7
    "The Rich J**k" phrase is repeated so many times , the user will quickly understand you are just an affiliate of that site.
     
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    dota Banned

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    #8
    gOOD sITE
    not so bad,more voer ur traffic
    I love it
    Good Luck fren
     
    dota, Sep 26, 2008 IP
  9. maka1111

    maka1111 Peon

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    Thanks everyone, I will post up a new revised one when I have time to work on it.
     
    maka1111, Sep 29, 2008 IP
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    bobbym Well-Known Member

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    good site but I don't like white background at the content area.
     
    bobbym, Sep 29, 2008 IP
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    Chios Well-Known Member

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    design wise the blog need some improvement

    theme does not display well AT all in fireforx 2
     
    Chios, Sep 29, 2008 IP
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    not bad start
    the content in the middle you might want some padding to keep text from being so close to edge, and possibly add a border to the boxes
     
    002media, Sep 29, 2008 IP
  13. maka1111

    maka1111 Peon

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    what about now? Any better???
     
    maka1111, Oct 7, 2008 IP
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    Squace Peon

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    In Firefox on Apple Mac side looks strange, you can use browsershots .org to see how your page looks in different browsers.
     
    Squace, Oct 8, 2008 IP
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    pretty good
     
    sega009, Oct 8, 2008 IP
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    LOGO? even if you just changed the font a little and added a dollar sign it would make the site look more proffesional
     
    Jingletruck, Oct 8, 2008 IP