Can some SEO expert kindly take a look at my site

Hi, I have a new site, which has page 3 ranking for one of it's main keywords, so as it's brand new I'm happy with that. But another of my main keywords it isn't ranking for. I write for the visitors not the SE's but whilst it reads well I wonder if I could have over done the use of that keyword.

If anyone would be so kind as to look over it for me, I would be very grateful.

I will PM you the url.

Thanks In Advance For Any Help

Dee

 

What's your site URL ?

 

Your allowed to post the url.

 

See you are optimizing your website for humans not for spiders, well don't get confused in keyword density, it does not work any more.
Just make unique fresh and quality content,
And place your targeted keywords in title and description.
You will get surely good results when next time google bots crwal your website...
Best of luck...

 

send me the url, will have a quick look

 

Dee, I can take a look for you, if you would like. PM me the URL, as well as the phrases it ranks well for, and those it does not. I will provide my best advice.