I want this thread to be helpfull for everyone that wants to make a landingpage. And all questions are welcome so far I can answer. Im not having any convertions at all after getting 4000 unique visitors which where almost a targated group of make money people. So something is wrong or it doesn't look legit or I don't know. I need some help. About my product. It is own made and its honestly a real good product too so after some sells I'm sure I will get good revieuws that will help sells. But for now I have to make the page look better. I have tried lots of different ways. And Im lost now. the page is http://www.szpte.com and thanks in advance.
Something that always strikes me when I'm looking at a site wanting my money is the language literacy of the site. In a lot of visitors eyes, you will tend to come across as a fly by night operation if it looks like it was written very quickly, then not proofread. After all, if you were really serious about a business, you'd surely look after such a small detail (in the visitor's mind). You might benefit from simply copying and pasting the page into an editor like Microsoft Word, running spelling/grammar check and placing the content back into the page.
Hello Im expecting lots of revieuwss. but thanks to those too and I also agree about the grammar, Im gonna work on that and about the length I thought the more information the better an interested someone could get informed from that point of vieuw. But I'm waiting for more revieuws. Thanks in advance. And I will reward some one with a very helpfull revieuw..
i think you should reformat the text and layout, u can see other site selling product like you do, and take a look on text and image formatting, make it little more professional
Your domain needs to be more specific. And the content that you have needs to be readjusted. It looks pretty spammy to me.... "most landing pages look spammy". Make yours stand out.
At first thnx a lot for the comments. Hmm if it was cool and nice it had to convert but thats not really happening. I've made some changes on the letter colors, tried to make the whole text shorter, took the testimonial videos away, gonna set them up on an other page, but I still don't know how to convert the sales, I have almost 700 UV a day doing IM. I really need help and want to award that people with lots of handysoftwares or an ebook from the package or money. Im really waiting.
Yes your right. But I don't know how to make my salespage to not look spammy. I want to do everything for that. My products are not spammy products.
If you believe in product and think it can sell better with experience of older IMs then try selling it on CB. Check whether they approove it or not. And still your landing page is not kindaaa professional mainly because of formatting. Check other products on CB marketplace (which are converting well) and see what changes you can make on your page.
Hey the landing page looks really nice. I have bought it, just want to make some extra money. Hope everything goes on well in the next few days or weeks. btw, maybe I'm the right person to write the review and get the reward lol
First screen looks nice, but then i scroll and scroll and i get tired of scrolling. It is nice to have motivational texts but don`t forget ur target. Ur target is to sell. And a loooooot of text, even motivational, don`t sell. Re-organize the layout and use better content structure. My opinion. Good luck!
I wouldn't immediately reorganize the site because it seems "spammy." Remember that many of these sites are written in such a way because that tends to be what sells. Although it may look that way to you, you're somewhat more web savvy than the typical user. A birthday clown probably looks horrible to a professional magician, but he keeps the kids entertained doesn't he?