can some one look at my web site please

Discussion in 'Websites' started by dougvcd, May 20, 2007.

  1. #1
    ok thanks to all for the help they have given me on this forum
    but could some one have a look and see if all is ok
    and any comments or suggestions
    please will be welcome
    cheers
    Doug
    caravan-holiday-exchange.com
     
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  2. bacanze

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  3. dougvcd

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    #3
    thanks for that i think most of the errors are on first page and all to do with the pics etc
    as a newbie and not sure what i am doing how should i proceed to correct
    cheers
    Doug
     
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    NITRO23456 Well-Known Member

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    give it some colour!
     
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    #5
    ok, After having a short look, you need to update the images throughout:

    On the following pages you will need to fix:
    - register.html (the images disappear)
    - browse.php (the navagation bar has disappered)

    You need to add titles to all pages, so no untitled documents or missing ones.
    Add meta tags throughout the site
    Add more content to sub pages
    Add more information regarding what a caravan swap is, ie advantages, perhaps reviews, add a social side to the site, etc
    Try adding, as mentioned a little colour, although stylishly....

    Also I tried looking at your register document, and it needs a little work, if you want to send us a pm, I might be able to sort it....

    Ohh, by the way, it seems a really good idea, and with a lot of development and advertising.. And a method of moneytising you could earn a packet :)

    Hope that Helps
     
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  6. dougvcd

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    #6

    thanks to all will go back to drawing board
    cheers
    Doug
     
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    330td Well-Known Member

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    #7
    Where is the design ?
     
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    #8
    Psychedelic!! Is that the look you were after?
     
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    Well, hes changed it with colour :) have been talking to him via pm...
     
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    330td Well-Known Member

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    #10
    OMG replace this flashy yellow background :eek:
     
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    Yes, tray to make it nice, more complex, thats my opinion.
     
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    ouch! the yellow is hurting my eyes dude!
     
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    #13
    You need to review the design to make it more professional and a site that people can trust. And turn off the yellow.
     
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    #14
    The yellow background needs to go.. it's too bright. The only part of the layout I like are your tab buttons, try to design a new layout around this design concept. Something web 2.0, well aligned and clean.
     
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    #15
    i agree that the yellow you used is too bright. change to a lighter shade of yellow...
     
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    #16
    Tabs look bad without something under them.

    Change your username and password - it only took me one guess.

    The latter is a moot point, as there is no verification on the member's page.
     
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    #17
    1 you could change the background , it`s hurting my eyes ( and some other users` one )
    2 the top menu isn`t quite okay , I can see how you made those buttons , those "curved corners" are not perfect
    3 create a layout and keep it along all pages
    4 create a better logo
    5 add a footer menu
     
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    #18
    You don't have to completely get rid of the yellow, but turn it down a bit at least. Since you are now using a colored background, you have problems with your rounded tabs up top - they have white in the corners... put something behind your tabs for the look and feel of tabbed pages (maybe creating the look of a piece of paper for each section?

    Add content and keep reading on HTML and web design. Don't get stuck or emotional about a specific design - keep reworking it and with some experience, you will get better.

    Matt
     
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    LMAO I found it too :D
     
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