Can Anyone Suggest Me Please

Discussion in 'Google AdWords' started by Sumitthewriter, Oct 28, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hi,
    A few days back i asked for a valuable advice from users here about my website as it was not generating much sales even after putting lot of money on adwords.

    As suggested by many users, i did a complete makeover of my website and now i shall be happy to know if it looks professional and if anyone who visits my website would buy something from my website. I mean does it look smart enough to generate sales??

    Please suggest.. here is the link http://www.theexpertwriters.com
     
    Sumitthewriter, Oct 28, 2010 IP
  2. DNH

    DNH Peon

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    Hi, I'm kinda new here.
    I'm a graphic designer.
    Must say, your header is kinda huge & it's identical on every single page. Does it add anything, 2 people smiling and a row of people behind them.
    My advise, smaller header: different image (but similar style) on every page. Tell something in the header too.

    Design your website with these words in mind: AIDA

    Attention (Big words, nice images)
    Interest (Telling your story)
    Desire (Make them NEED it!)
    Action (Make them buy it)

    I hope this helps,

    Sincerely,

    DNH
     
    DNH, Oct 28, 2010 IP
  3. Sumitthewriter

    Sumitthewriter Guest

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    Thanks DNH. I completely agree. I shall change my header and a few stuff as well.
     
    Sumitthewriter, Oct 28, 2010 IP
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    rahman_abrar Active Member

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    You will get benefited for sure if you try this and after that this will become like-
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    S---> Satisfaction

    I mean to say that you and your customers buying those products will be satisfied. :)
     
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    stephensmith Active Member

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    I just looked at it and I think it looks good -- sharp, uncluttered and professional.

    What do your Adword ads say? Are they generating lots of clickthroughs but few sales? Or few clickthroughs to begin with?

    My thought is that this is a hard area to compete in, with so many people making themselves available (usually very cheaply) for content writing. Your emphasis on quick turnaround time is smart. The only slight tweak I might suggest is to see if you can get the ideas of "quality writing" and/or "customized to your specifications" into the headline. Might need a subhead to work that all in.

    But overall I think the site looks good and reads well (I checked out your subpages, too). Good luck!

    Steve
     
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    Sumitthewriter Guest

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    Hi Steve and Rahman,

    Thanks for the valuable advice. Yes, Now i am getting a very good results from adwords. What i did was that i deleted irrelevant keywords from my ad campaign and created some new Ads there. The Results were amazing. Very First Day, 3 people clicked on my website and guess what all of them placed big orders. In fact, i couldn't believe it how quickly sales cab be generated when things are right.

    When my website was poorly designed, many people in here suggested many changes in my site and when i did it, my website got a complete makeover. Without them, it was impossible. I am really overwhelmed by how people in this forum love to help each other by offering genuine opinions.
    Thanks a lot ! :)
     
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    This thread is great! I got a lot!
    Steve and Rahman, thanks!
     
    guazi, Oct 31, 2010 IP
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    I completely agree.
     
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    I‘m not,because there is nothing, i think
     
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    rahman_abrar Active Member

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    You are welcome, even sometimes when I am trapped in some situation, members on this forum help a lot. If you are benefited from my knowledge its my pleasure and I am happy too because atleast I am capable of helping someone. And 'hunjune' its not like I am angry with your comment or so. May be you couldn't find what Steve and I want to say or it doesn't work for you. There is no compulsion on anyone its just an advice, may be you like, may be not, it depends on your need.:)
     
    rahman_abrar, Nov 2, 2010 IP
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    seems nice, i suggest you to add your contact info on homepage, that may help to get more contacts?
     
    leon2046, Nov 7, 2010 IP