Can anyone help me write a classified ad for the paper

This is what i have at the moment please comment as im not very good at this



Motorcycle servicing
Save money on servicing costs
Your motorcycle serviced at your own home to dealer standards
Only genuine parts used



would you read it and respond?

Many thanks

 

@ging999
What you've got isn't bad,however I would be more comfortable about calling you if I were to read something more such as:
10 years experience.
Bonded certified mechanic.

 

Hmm ok I do have 13 years experance and Im honda Factory trained

 

Motorcycle servicing
Save money on servicing costs
Your motorcycle serviced at your own home to dealer standards
13 years expriance, factory trained,Only genuine parts used


Is that too much now ?

 

@ging999
By George I think you've got it!

 

thanks just need to work on the spelling lol