Can anybody review my website which is promoting adsense product

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    Hello Friends,I have been lingering around this forum for quiet a while,and found the members here very helpful.

    I have started with bum marketing ,few days back and hopeful to get success.

    Meanwhile I also wanted to work upon my website ,which is selling all adsense related product like templates,keyword research softwares,trafiic booster,many PLR articles ,website maker software,many opt in list and Full instruction as how to build SEO optimised website and use PPC effectively to bring traffic.

    SEE the website in my signature link ,the design and structure still need to be improved,so I need advice as how to impreove it more on every front to make it attractive sales page.

    I am goin to use BUm marketing initially to promote and since I am Keeping the price low ,I expect good sales.

    As of now not inviting affiliates,in future may plan to do so.

    My website is Revenueboosterz.com
     
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  2. bl4ckmaN^

    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    Poor graphics, page not centered, difficult to read text, weak formatting....

    Man, there has to be some major work done....
     
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  3. guptishika

    guptishika Active Member

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    ya as I said designing part still legt,I have hired professional designer to create attractive sales page,so Formatting and Graphics part wont be a problem,
    But apart from that is there anything else I need to work upon.
     
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  4. bl4ckmaN^

    bl4ckmaN^ Well-Known Member

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    Well, that's probably the main problem.
     
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  5. guptishika

    guptishika Active Member

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    ok wil surely work on dat,any more sugetsion anybody else
     
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    Man Thinking as a costumer, you need to change this sales letter I wouldnt read it (small fonts), and i saw many promises but not beneficts ... and I dunno maybe u pushing too hard the product ("the act of buying") makes it sound like a scam ...

    Edit: if u have money, maybe you should consider hiring someone to re write your sales letter.
     
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    It does need some serious work, it's really harsh to look at and the graphics look really cheap and nasty.

    I think it's hard to give you more feedback because its just too hard to look at at the moment, once you get a new design up let everybody know so we can give you some more feedback
     
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    wowhaxor Banned

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    Not to be harsh, I think it could be good with some work, but I really get annoyed reading it. "IF YOU DON’T MAKE YOURSELF 1000$ OR MORE PER MONTH
    ONLINE YOU OWE IT TO YOURSELF TO READ THIS
    LETTER THE NEXT 5 MINUTES COULD CHANGE YOUR
    LIFE FOREVER!!!!!!! SO PAY ATTENTION!"

    "due to google terms and conditions complete information has been hided"

    needs some puncuation, a lot, and stop overusing and putting in words that don't need to be there! Proof read it a couple times, see where it doesn't flow well. I understand english may not be your first language, you may want to think about hiring a writer in the BST forum.
     
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