Can Anybody Critque this Landing Page?

http://v1g.org/

 

looks good

 

Looks pretty good to me. I would double check to see if you have some good long tail keywords as well as optimizing it.

What's with you're domain, it's great that it is so short I'm just not sure it fits?

Good luck!

 

awesome thanks. The name just seems offical, and since its short its very easy to remember.

 

backround = background
justisce = justice
realsed = released

run it on the meta description too. If you are looking for organic traffic I would put the h1 tag on the page heading to help with search engines.

 

Thanks all fixed the keywords are in the meta and such already.

 

its very in your face if you know what I mean which is good in some cases. You have lots of different fonts and sizes and colours which I would never recommend.

 

Too much colors

 

My first thought was- effective. It looks great and I hope it does very well.