Contest Business card redesign - PayPal payment $40 72 hours

I am looking to redesign our business card. I'm supplying the original art to show what is presently being used. The information that needs to be updated is the website address and e-mail address.

It should read www.roadrunnerselfstorage.com and the e-mail address should read

The only problem other than the incorrect web address is the print is too hard to read on the bottom half for older people. So my advice is: the text needs to be bumped up in size and the colors and logo presently used on the top portion are good.

I just thought of one more required change. Please insert an Inc. after the Roadrunner Storage name. We just changed the legal structure of the Company and I forgot to mention it on the original request.

I'm open to a whole new design, but might only want the text changed and enlarged. Just need to see some entries to know what I will like.

I will pay the winner promptly via PayPal and the file will need to be ready for print with I believe a .PDS file with the layers flat. I'm thinking a .PDF is cool too.

Here is a .jpeg of the existing card:


The .TIF format is here - http://www.roadrunnerselfstorage.com/images/bc2.tif

The contest will end Sunday February 28, 2010 at 9PM PST I reserve the right to end the contest early if I see a design that works for me.

I do provide Feedback on entries and hope I have been clear on my instructions. Feel free to ask if you are unsure of anything.

Good Luck!!

 

can you supplied the logo ?? or you want a brand new design ??

 

The logo is in the design. The .TIF is the best image I have. I do not have JUST the logo available.

The top half I feel looks pretty good. I am open to an overall new design OR just updating the text as requested in my original request. Thank you.

 

my entry

 

biruhato: I like your design a lot!! I think the black font is easier to read. I also like how you changed the design with the curve.

I just thought of one more required change. Please insert an Inc. after the Roadrunner Storage name. We just changed the legal structure of the Company and I forgot to mention it on the original request.

 

how about now?

 

Very nice!
Just one update - the "." should be after Inc - Like this - Inc.
Thanks!!

 

revised :

 

My Entries

 

please wait!

 

stellah57: Sorry, but I do not care for any of the three designs. The shapes of the orange areas do not flow for me.

 

Hi there,

Here is my submission.

 

my entry..

 

bokunokane: I like the design, but I would like the font on the bottom portion to be black. The white seems harder to read. For the phone number I do use "." to separate the phone number rather than "-" or the "(". I like how you handled adding Inc. to the top portion very much. Looks like part of the original design.

The back of the card will probably be blank and able to be written on.

j0opre: The top is missing the "Inc." and Suite is not spelled correctly or is the domain. No very fond of ALL CAPS either. Is the outside orange border going to work when the card is printed. No sure in regards to the printing process and the bleed.

 

update

 

Thanks for the comments. Here's a revision. I changed the font to black.

I kept the back just as an idea. I'm not quite sure what you'll be writing on it but I put "storage unit" and "gate code". I can always just make it blank.

Curious, are you located off the 215? I'm not familiar with Grand Terrace but that's in Riverside?

 

preview:



feedback please. Thanks.

 

my entry

 

J0opre: thanks for the update. Much better.
bokunokane: Looks much better. I had thought about printing the backside, but with the gloss coat they usually use, you cannot write on them very well. Yes, we are off the 215 Barton Road Exit.

buncoh: Probably tied for first with one correction - The website and e-mail address have not been updated per my opening instructions.
Chewysmom: I like everything but the orange design.

 

thanks for feedback
is this one better, I took the white lines out.