Contest Business Card Design Contest $40

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  1. vvvjeb

    vvvjeb Well-Known Member

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    #21
    Killuah #14 - front of the card looks really good, on the back maybe make the logo a little larger and use a black outline instead of white
    jreign #15 - ty for the revision
    biili #16 - ty for the entry, certainly gets your attention. we don't really like the design though
    killuah #17 - don't like the logo split. we do like the bands you have on the front of the card and we like how the info is presented on the back though.
    killuah #18 - nice looking card, not sure if we like vertical though.
    jreign #20 - not a bad looking card, just looks a little busy and cramped

    Thank you everyone.
     
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    biili Well-Known Member

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    #22
    Can you please give me a little bit more details about it , what dont you like on it because "i dont like the design" its not helping me to make a design that will please you.
     
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  3. jreign

    jreign Well-Known Member

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    #23
    revision for 2nd entry
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  4. killuahxh

    killuahxh Active Member

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    #24
    @vvvjeb: Thanks for your feedback!

    Below is the revision of #14:

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  5. killuahxh

    killuahxh Active Member

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    #25
    This is the revision of #17:

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    jreign Well-Known Member

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    #26
    2nd entry revision
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  7. vvvjeb

    vvvjeb Well-Known Member

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    #27
    Thanks everyone, think we are getting close.

    biili #22 - sorry, I'm not a designer so I don't really know what to tell you outside of we don't really like the design. No revisions needed, you're welcome to submit a new design.
    jreign #23 - ty for the revision
    killuah #24 - front looks good, like the revisions on the back. on the back can you left align the font or something else? we don't like the gaps in the writing.
    killuah #25 - ty for the revision. can you center the drop shadow behind the shields on the front and back. You may need to make the drop shadows a little smaller
    jreign #26 - ty for the revision
     
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  8. killuahxh

    killuahxh Active Member

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    #28
    @vvvjeb: Thanks for your feedback!

    Below is the revision of #24:

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  9. killuahxh

    killuahxh Active Member

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    #29
    And below is the revision of #25:

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  10. Ceaser2

    Ceaser2 Banned

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    #30
    Hi,

    My try. Feedback app..:)

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    Regards
    C2
     
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    #31
    My entry. Feedback appreciated
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    vvvjeb Well-Known Member

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    #32
    Thank you everyone, we have decided on a winner. For the second time this week Killuah has won my contest. The winning entry is #28.
     
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    #33
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    jreign Well-Known Member

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    #34
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    #35
    @vvvjeb: Thanks a lot for choosing my design! Files sent and payment received!
     
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