This one is not as ugly as other ones I saw, you lack that big buzz headline text in red. So I do not know if that is a good or bad thing, my time on these kind of a sites is usually between 0.1 and 0.2 seconds.
The landing page is nice, but for this type of product I don't think a sales letter with testimonials is necessary. If someone is looking to recover their data they're going to search for a program or guide on how to do just that, and it's likely that they'll have their credit card in hand ready to buy. You don't necessarily need to use a bunch of clever language techniques to seduce the buyer into buying as you would with say a "make money online" product. All the best, Liam
Are you promoting this landing page through adwords...if you are then It should be much shorter in length and you should get directly to the point. But if you are using this as a sales page, then I think you need to change a lot of things. My suggestion is you should go to clickbank, search for the top products in any category and study there landing pages on how they do it...Once you read a few of them, it will automatically come to you. all the best maxi