Brand New High Quality Product Affiliate Needed.

"Beat The Battle With The Bulges" is brand new. It is the ultimate guide to weight management which can be done in the home. It contains meal plans and simple exercises for men, women and children. This book is designed to change people's eating habits and develop a healthy lifestyle for life. This book also gives people a CHOICE of how they want to eat healthy. It also contains my contact details for those who want support while managing their weight. The website is still pending approval from Clickbank but is http://www.Beatthebattlewiththebulges.com

 

There are so many bad things you have done in this page...where to start:
1) hire someone to do the graphics for you...the book looks really bad
2) colors used will never do you any good
3) what is this in the navigation Home...Page 2...some bla bla text?
4) you suppose to go to page 2 after you fill in your info? Terribly done! Page 2 is even more worse..
5) the bla bla page is the thank you page? wooooooow!
6) the contact page is the best looking one...so see where I getting at...

HIRE someone to do you page...if this is how the page looks like I don't want to think about how the product looks like...hehehe just downloaded it....you don't even have to pay for this product maaaaan you have to be kidding me

 

If you want to I can help you with the design. Check my sig for samples

 

Friend, you need to invest atleast a few hundred dollars here. Your site looks bad at present.
What matters is how good your page seems and that doesn't just involve graphics . The ebook contents matter only after the person spent money.

 

I downloaded your ebook for FREE - but I wouldn't say it's "high quality" yet. You did work hard on it for sure with screenshots of recipes, but here's my recommendations...

1) Use a free WP sales template -- vendors do not need to make it hard on themselves. There are tons of free templates out there.
2) Learn basic copywriting -- something more persuasive. Offer some bonuses
3) Hire someone or learn basic HTML to remove the thank you and download page.
4) Hire a graphic designer to create a new ecover

 

I just got done with the 30 day wealth system. I'm assuming you used the exact same thing to learn about creating and selling e-books online.. Because I have something very similar to you made. I don't have the download link on the bar at the top I removed the bar. I want to know how much it is going to cost me to higher someone to design a better page for and e-cover? Thanks guys

 

How much did you pay for that 30 day to 'wealth' system (or was it free?)...if it didn't include free sales template and links to create ecovers for free or anyone mentioning to changing PLR turn-key products?

 

Not a believable eye catcher in my opinion.

Work on this amigo.

 

I think you need to change your product name and website URL.

"Beat The Battle With The Bulges" doesn't really make sense (at least to a North American audience), the correct phrase is "Beat The Battle With The Bulge" (no "s" at the end)

 

Well, if anything he just needs to make his sales pitch more attractive. Bulges vs bulge isn't really any difference. I am from the US and it makes sense to me. A large person can have multiple bulges.

 

Thanks for your feedback. Appreciate the positive response. have been trying to work out how to remove the menu buttons form the page pitch page.

 

Thanks for that. He is a she to start with. i had bulge then changed it. Yeah!I had multipe bulges too!

 

What is not the eye catcher? And what is not believable? It worked for me that's why I'm sharing it.

 

Maybe I'll come back to you later but I think that Rick does a great job.

 

Sounds like you need a few lessons yourself...........In human relations and how to respond to people. I am not the kind of person who lets people rent space in my head fortunately.

 

I don't need to say what I paid or if it was free. There are links and I did use the links and up graded where it was suggested. I don't understand your last PLR turn-key products? Please explain.

 

I ahve no proble with the 30 day wealth system. How did you remove the bar?

 

8 posts by the thread starter in 15 minutes...none of which make much sense. Awesome.

 

I guess there are a lot of people out there who think that they can do a better job for mega bucks. This is my first attempt and I guess I will improve as I go on. I appreciate the comments of those who recognise that I have put in a lot of work. thank you. If you have any TIPS to offer they will be gratefully accepted. Thank you for your comments. I will change the post.

 

Can you clarify what WP stands for please. I really do appreciate your comments.