Hm. The design looks slapdash and haphazard, very incoherent and messy. I would reconsider your target audience and your niche because otherwise you'll be pretty much waiting on thin air...
The site back ground is nice. But i think the site is a bit messy. you should organize all contents. Best wishes. ___________________________________________________________ Custom lanyards
Poor design like it was said. Main part looks empty. With desktop-like background i'd suggest you make main part look like a paper sheet.