Hello, I am starting a blog, somewhat inspired by a thread here, to map out my struggle to "make it" with making money online. The blog is not really "finished" it just has 1 post and I haven't done anything else to it, but I wanted feedback on the way that I compose the post, and if you get any sense of character from the writing. This is most important to me, as I want the readers to get a sense of the person writing and going through this instead of it being strictly informational. However, if its not going over well I'd like to know if I need to change the way I'm writing before I continue through the process. For Warning: There are some links in there that go to my pages, I'm saying this now because I don't want people saying thats the only reason why I posted this. This is the link: http://mission2600.wordpress.com/2009/08/30/update-this-far-83009/ Any feedback is appreciated.