Bed Bugs How to get Rid of them .com sales copy

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    Please review sales copy of http://www.bedbugshowtogetridofthem.com/

    I dont want review on design because it is with PLR and already our there on the web.

    Just review sales copy and any other reviews please feel free to suggest.


    regards,
    ASHISH THAKKAR

    Still waiting for reviews.

    thanks :)


    ASHISH THAKKAR
     
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    PuneetJvw, Oct 5, 2009 IP
  2. netdriver788

    netdriver788 Well-Known Member

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    The blog is very informative and iam not much aware of it.
     
    netdriver788, Oct 22, 2009 IP
  3. PuneetJvw

    PuneetJvw Well-Known Member

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    #3
    Thanks but i did not understand. Did you comment on the bed bugs sales copy ?


    regards,
    ASHISH THAKKAR
     
    PuneetJvw, Oct 27, 2009 IP
  4. bluepanda

    bluepanda Peon

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    I suspect that English is not your first language as there are a number of grammatical errors in the copy. This could have an effect on your sales. I would suggest that you go to the Buy, Sell Trade section of the forums, explain the problem and ask if someone would proof read the copy. It should cost very little and you can set the price.
    Good luck.
     
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  5. PuneetJvw

    PuneetJvw Well-Known Member

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    #5
    -That is correct english is not my first language.

    -Someone else has written the sales copy for bed bugs how to get rid of them and NOT me.

    -Can you point 1 or 2 errors. I already paid for the sales copy.


    regards,
    ASHISH THAKKAR
     
    PuneetJvw, Oct 27, 2009 IP