Automated rewriter - please review

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by goscript, Apr 2, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hy,
    please let me know your opinion about the quality of the automated rewritten article.

    Here's the original article:

    "Moreover, this flow of positive energy is experience by people around you too and you observe that even they are friendlier with you. You get more respect from others. They are more responsive to your queries. They themselves experience the freshness that you are exuding. They love working with you and for you. Yes, that’s how it works. Some people might even go ahead and ask you about the skin care products you use (you might or might not reveal those secret skin care products to them). Thus, a healthy skin can be instrumental in creating a pleasant and friendly environment around you. On the other hand, carelessness or negligence on this front can make you look unattractive and dull. You will not only look dull but also feel dull. Your work efficiency is reduced. Even the people you meet might not be as friendly. In fact, it might lead to the aging process getting started much earlier."

    And the rewritten article is:
    "Moreover, this flow of positive energy too is experiment by people around you and you observe that even they are friendlier with you. You obtain more respect of others. They are more sensitive to your questions. They test themselves the freshness which you exude. They like to work with you and for you. Yes, it is how that functions. Some could even advance and question you about the products of care of skin which you employ (you could or did not can indicate these secret products of care of skin to them). Thus, a healthy skin can be instrumental by creating a pleasant and friendly environment around you. On the one hand, the carelessness or the negligence on this before can return you to seem it without attraction and chechmate. You will seem not only chechmate but you will also smell chechmate. Your effectiveness of work is reduced. Even the people whom you meet could not be like friendly. In fact, it could carry out to obtain process of ageing much earlier started."

    What do you think ?
    Can this be good enough for adsense websites?


    Thanks.
     
    goscript, Apr 2, 2007 IP
  2. teen-9x

    teen-9x Banned

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    #2
    i wan't view your URL ?
     
    teen-9x, Apr 2, 2007 IP
  3. goscript

    goscript Prominent Member

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    #3
    There is no url... just wanted to know if the article can be seen as spamy by google. Original content it is 100% for sure to google, but is it enough?
     
    goscript, Apr 2, 2007 IP
  4. Artisan

    Artisan Well-Known Member

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    #4
    Most probably Google would not like both these articles.
     
    Artisan, Apr 2, 2007 IP
  5. zeoncitizen

    zeoncitizen Peon

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    #5
    what is "Automated rewriter" ?
    some proggy, script?
     
    zeoncitizen, Apr 3, 2007 IP