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Discussion in 'Websites' started by ajay3456, Jun 13, 2017.

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  1. #1
    Hello guys I am a blogger and,
    i need your feedback about
    my content title and featured pictures.
    Is they are attracted or not.
    Check here http://coozyworld.com/2017/06/08/nawazuddin-siddiquis-kids-give-versova-beach-makeover-help-clean-160-tonnes-garbage/
    and my website name is
    coozyworld.com
     
    ajay3456, Jun 13, 2017 IP
  2. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    #2
    The images are a bit small and down below the fold so initially the reader is just presented with a stack of text with font sizes changing without reason and looking odd. The post title gets repeated. You probably should fix that.

    I'm not sure that your byline is working for you.
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    sarahk, Jun 13, 2017 IP
  3. ajay3456

    ajay3456 Member

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    #3
    what is byline?
     
    ajay3456, Jun 14, 2017 IP
  4. sarahk

    sarahk iTamer Staff

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    The text under the site name. In your case it's "Just get entertain yourself" which is grammatically incorrect
     
    sarahk, Jun 14, 2017 IP
  5. ajay3456

    ajay3456 Member

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    oh thanks
     
    ajay3456, Jun 14, 2017 IP
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    Meina Active Member

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    #6
    The title is too long. I’d get rid of the ‘Help Clean 160 Tonnes Of Garbage’ and put it in the content. If you just leave it as ‘Nawazuddin Siddiqui’s Kids Give Versova Beach A Makeover’, that’d be great.

    The featured image is good. As for the images you use in your post, you should either:
    1. Put just one image or both at the top under the title and enlarge it.
    2. Position the image on the top left or right and wrap the text around it.
    You should add more images of the kids cleaning the beach, as that’s what the post is about. People expect to see more of that image.
     
    Meina, Jun 14, 2017 IP
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    #7
    okay i am gonna work on this
    thank you
     
    ajay3456, Jun 14, 2017 IP