are you a native german speaker?

Discussion in 'Copywriting' started by mercuryyy, Feb 26, 2008.

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    Hello buddy, thanks for responding i got this small thing to ask you, i'v just got my site translated from english to german, Can you just take a very quick glance read 1-3 sentences and tell me if its understandble, dosnt have to be well written just understandble.

    Thanks so much.

    www.poker-paypal.com/de
     
    mercuryyy, Feb 26, 2008 IP
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    mercuryyy Well-Known Member

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    come on fellow DP memmbers, i need some help, rep will be granted with full respect and love.
     
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    Hi, just had a look at your site and the translation makes absolutely no sense at all. If it was only a few sentenes I'd translated it for you but this needs to be redone completely.
     
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    mercuryyy Well-Known Member

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    msdriven thank so much for you feedback, it was done with a program, i much would you charge to translate the 3 articles on my main page, little less then 750 words all together.
     
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    msdriven79 Well-Known Member

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    Welcome :) I'd high-quality-translate it for $0,05 p. word. Please pm me if you are interested.
     
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    mercuryyy Well-Known Member

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    Hi i'v found google translator program it seems much more reliable. Does this translated text make any sense?

    PayPal ist mit Abstand das beliebteste Online-Zahlung und Existenz-Prozessor, auch unter Berücksichtigung der Tatsache, dass die überwiegende Mehrheit der Online-Glücksspiel-Websites erlauben keine Transaktionen mit PayPal.
     
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    Yes it's not perfect but it's much better and makes sense :)
     
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    It is a little more readable now.
     
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