Are My This Articles Are Bad!!!

http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/what-social-media-plugin-offer/
The title
What Social Media Plugin Offer

Should be plural, meaning either Media, Plugin or Offer should have an ‘s or be something like Wordpress Social Media Plugin

The first sentence has no actual substance. If you had put something like “You do not need to spend a lot of time, to broadcast your posts,” and rather than end in a period, end with an ! It would have made more sense, as an example.

I suggest you spend time reading, to understand good sentence structure in English. Just because MS Word or another program does not always highlight something as being wrong, doesn’t mean it is always right. Sentences to make sense depend on the wording structure, nouns, pronouns, verbs, adjectives and conjunctions all being in the right place, so you may want to look those up to understand what they are. Periods, commas, semi-colons, question marks and exclamation points, also need to be used properly for a sentence to have the proper structure.

As for any more help than this, like reading and addressing all of the issues in the articles, I do not have time for doing that and neither does any other writer.

 

I have a better idea. Open a new thread saying "[BUYING] Content Rewriter $xx for xx articles". Done.

If you want to ask for help for free, this is not the place. This is the place for either Earning Money or Spending Money.

 

Subhajit, Here is an example from the first link.: Thus, WordPress social plugin tools are becoming an important part of a such blog site and the trend is here to stay. I think a better way maybe: Thus, the WordPress social plugin tools are becoming a significant part of such blogs and the trend is here to stay. I agree when someone said above that although there are not many clear grammar errors they just don't sound right. We are writers and can easily understand what you are trying to say but it is not very readable for general readers.

 

I called it sense of language. And it is earned by writing countless sentences for years.

 

You wrote and/or spun these articles for a client and you are asking us to fix them for you? Are you offering to pay any of us for proofreading these articles?

I'll give you a few freebies, but I'm not going to do your work for you.

http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013/02/12/getting-updates-on-seo-techniques/

The entire opening paragraph doesn't make any sense. It's just keyword stuffing and poorly spun content. What is the article about? The opening paragraph needs to inform the reader as to what the rest of the article is about. I think what you are trying to tell me, the reader, is that if I have a site running on WP, that using an SEO plugin will benefit my site by helping me optimize my site without getting my site banned by Google or any other search engine.

The entire article just needs to be thrown in the trash bin. It's horrible because it just reads like something produced by a word spinning tool. There is nothing of value to the reader.

http://roulsubho.wordpress.com/2013...ugins-for-wordpress-ease-the-way-to-post-ads/

I would completely rewrite this opening paragraph. The article is about plugins that were developed for AdSense users to add an ad within a blog post. The background information on what WP is, what it runs on, and its plugin architecture isn't necessary. It's not relevant to what the article is actually supposed to be about.

The article content is a review of two different plugins. The opening paragraph doesn't even give me a clue that two plugins are recommended and a review of each one is provided. I was told that there are different plugins that work with AdSense and that some are free and some are paid, but that was about it. No elaboration. No clue as to what I'm going to learn by reading the rest of the article. Why should I continue reading?



You really need to remember that you're writing for a human being, not the search engines. The few articles I took a look at had poor grammar and obviously weren't written for an actual person to read. A person with English as a second, third, or fourth language obviously wrote it and/or used spinning software. It's not just the language. There's poor structure in composing the paragraphs. It's just things are "off" that would indicate software was used to construct these articles.

 

Why is it that guy's like this get work online while struggling writers like myself who actually can provide quality work find it so difficult to get a decent job. :S

 

They charge so little that they end up at the top of the pile. However, the people who are looking to pay that little are not the kind of people you want to work for, anyway. Those who make the mistake of hiring out to low quality writers usually learn quickly why they have to offer more. Especially for something that is ghostwritten and so doesn't offer a writer's byline to compensate for a lower rate.

 

Most likely that depends on what you feel you are worth. If you are charging for writing quality content, then you are not even in the same league as a writer that is having trouble constructing a proper article.

 

client actually does not know today's marketing trends ,You don't require keyword density in your article,no more articles based on keywords . You have to just work as you do offline publishing like in newspaper and magazines for best result in SEO.Google Matter enough .