Anyone have an opinion about this site

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by ValDeV, Mar 12, 2010.

  1. #1
    Hey everyone I'm working on a site right now, and I am having a few issues with visuals/coding and I was wondering if anyone is willing to take a look at it.

    http://tenpointpromotions.com

    Stuff I'm aware of:
    -The wood png's are large, this is because im waiting for the background-image to become finalized so I can make the png into a jpg (get rid of the transparencies).

    Anyone have ideas?
     
    ValDeV, Mar 12, 2010 IP
  2. randywolf244

    randywolf244 Peon

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    overall it looks good. add hover actions to your links. capitalize your bottom navbar. keep in png (transparencies are good) and for the logo at the top add a transparency on the bg.

    also add something, somewhere, anywhere that says that its a cornhole d.i.y. site. cuz i had no idea what it was at first.
     
    randywolf244, Mar 14, 2010 IP
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    no sorry
     
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    I like the colors and layout a lot.

    However for me, the site kind of fails here ...
    -- I have no clue what you're selling.
    -- It's great you have a subtitle. It says "do it yourself kit" but doesn't say what I will be "doing myself." Building an ark? A cake? You could "sell" me right there and take away my confusion.
    -- Saw something about playing a game... ? What game?
    -- Have no idea what a "cornhole" is ... Maybe your target audience will know for sure?

    Hope this helps. But a copywriter may be helpful. ;-)
     
    jewel3000, Mar 14, 2010 IP