hI GUYS, I MADE THIS SITE FOR teenagers, could you please review it and tell me what you think about it????? p.s. you can join if you want lol thnx for your review and help guys!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! site: www.chillout101.com
Well I agree that the header must be changed, even if it is just made smaller it would make it look 100x better. Maybe instead of 900x278 you should try maybe 800x200? It is also very busy and hard to read. Other than that I think it is well done with the color schemes and everything else. You are on the right track and it is a good concept, it just needs a much more professional design for the teenagers of this age to even look at it twice.
Way too many exclamation marks. My eyes hurt. If you're looking at getting in people over the age of ten, I suggest you remove them
As what they've suggested, change the header. Make a smaller and a good one. As to your forum, it is OK, lots of categories. Good luck!
eek, another teenager forum? These don't usually go anywhere, be prepared to put a lot of time and effort into it if you wish to get anywhere at all. As others said, the style should be changed.
It looks ok, I don't think the header is too bad however I would clean up some of the spelling and grammar, specifically: 1) In the header you spell teenagers as "teenages"(!) 2) Cye round in the welcome box 3) GIve in the dating and relationships description 4) small i in school section and again in suggestions (should be I) 5) There should be a capital letter to start the sentence in Socialise category 6) realting instead of relating in Report Abuse category 7) "Please, Please and Please" in suggestions, I wouldn't capitalise the second two pleases. 8) It is quite heavy on exclamation marks and the word etc. Maybe you could trim down on some of the exclamation marks and replace some of the etc's with "and more" or something similar. Good luck!
WOW guys, your reviews have been so helpful, i never realised that the header looked soo bad!!!lol thnx for the compliment lojadeluxo Concept, Gamerlobby, Topsite15, five-0, crazy catsville,zac i have changed the header, wat do you think now? Emirates, i have removed the exclamations, how do you think it looks now? zac, any suggestions on how i can kickstart my forum? wud u be interrested in joining ? WOW italian ricepie,, thnx for the detailed review, i owe you one!!! sorted all mistajes *rep added* thnx guys, you were all really helpful, please tell me if you ever need my help ANy other suggestions guys???? cheers
guys do you think the new header sucks as well??? the one with the yellow background?? any other suggestions on improving it? thnx edit: header changed completely, how does it look now????? thnx
Like everyone said, do away with the header and tone the gradients down a bit. the green is a little loud as well.
ahhhhhh, ok lol, this is the third time i have done it everyone else are taking about the old header, which was this: http://www.chillout101.com/images/SilverGreen/logo.jpg and before that: http://www.chillout101.com/images/SilverGreen/logo1.jpg thnx for the feedback guys will it be ok for me to ask, if anyone would like to join, i am gonna spend all day doing posts, anyone wann give me company????lol thnx