Any comments/suggestions on my sales page?

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Skribblez, Oct 9, 2012.

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    What do you guys think of my sales page? This is actually my first product/eBook and I'm very new to the Clickbank vendor scene, so I'm wondering if you guys have any comments/suggestions/feedback on my sales page and if you could give me any advice on how I could possibly improve it to generate more sales?

    Any comments and replies are highly appreciated and thank you in advance for your time :)
     
    Skribblez, Oct 9, 2012 IP
  2. lbmn

    lbmn Guest

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    It's a good site but there's a lot of information there - it's really long.

    Perhaps you could divide it up a bit and have your story on another page.

    In terms of generating more sales, I'd integrate a number of calls to action at regular intervals down the page, as the "order now" section is way down. It may be that after viewing the first video your viewer wants to just go for it but the have to search your ad to find out how to buy!

    Also on the list of contents, why not give your prospects a taster of a few sentences from that chapter just to tempt them in.

    Finally, your "contact me" page from the bottom menu needs to contain some sort of link - people expect to "click and go" rather than have to type in the email address.

    Well done and good luck with it.
     
    lbmn, Oct 10, 2012 IP
  3. Harneet1990

    Harneet1990 Greenhorn

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    I really liked it...But It is a kind of a long sales page..Sometimes, long sales page create negative effect...That's it..
    rest all is perfect..Keep it up...
     
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    andrej Notable Member

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    In my opinion it looks quite good. Maybe too long to read, but probably every clickbank sales page looks like that.
     
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    site looks good to me you have alot of content thats always a plus
     
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    is too long content.. just it negative point
     
    Wajak, Oct 10, 2012 IP