Building on my Introduction, I know I suck at sales pages and I'm not looking for your prototypical sales page either. I'm a marketing person, and as a marketing person I both suck at copywriting and have the foresight to recognize that my target audience loses trust at the sight of a typical sales page. Having said that, I've just gone into pre-launch for what I'll only describe as an exclusive club for excellent content. If that doesn't come across in the copy or if I could do better at expressing it, let me know - I'm WAY open to suggestions. The site is viralh2h.com I do realize I need to get some testimonials up there, but other than that what I can do to improve? Bigger font? Different phrasing? Less focus on../more focus on...? Different homepage? I'm not trying for the hard sell. The primary focus of the website is spreading itself, hence why the homepage is the blog. But if there's a strong reason to change that, I'm open to it.