Am I getting the message across ?

Discussion in 'Reviews' started by webbin, Mar 19, 2008.

  1. #1
    Just some tips needed about layout, more importantly do you get the message, let me know please all criticism appreciated.

    URL: http://www.audio-adverts.com
     
    webbin, Mar 19, 2008 IP
  2. Jake.Brenton

    Jake.Brenton Peon

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    #2
    Nice site, looks more like an info website, rather than as though you are selling something...which can be a good thing, but depends on what audience you are trying to attract/convert...
     
    Jake.Brenton, Mar 19, 2008 IP
  3. river

    river Active Member

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    I think the logo could be clearer. It seems cluttered. You have (I think) 4 different fonts, sideways vertical text and Voice2Page seems more important, with the bolder colors, than your site title. I would move the sign up form to the sidebar and rework the header.

    Good Luck
     
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  4. webbin

    webbin Banned

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    Thanks for the comments, but what did you mean here, did you mean I should move the Sign Up link, up higher in the list ?
     
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  5. river

    river Active Member

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    my mistake, not the sign up form but rather the login from that's in the header.
     
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    I like the site but I think there is a little too much text in the logo.
     
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  7. webbin

    webbin Banned

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    #7

    Hmm... ok I'll work on that... was there anything else you felt might need changing ?
     
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  8. webbin

    webbin Banned

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    #8

    Would you have the logo say anything at all, maybe just a larger sized "voice2page" logo in proportion to the globe, I will be moving the login form to the left nav so I can put some text in its place ?
     
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  9. Algert

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    no error message appeared but I didn't like the layout.
     
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  10. Goodfellas

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    Does the site sell anything...? Cause i cant tell...
     
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    Very attractive combinations.Loads faster in ff and opera.
    Its pretty good.
     
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