All constructive criticisms welcomed.

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Beautifun, Dec 9, 2008.

  1. #1
    Hi there,

    Please let me know what you think. I'm a newbie and the following site is in its fledging stage, so be kind ;)

    That said, all constructive criticisms are welcomed!

    http://azarticle.com
     
    Beautifun, Dec 9, 2008 IP
  2. AloudWhisper

    AloudWhisper Peon

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    What is loading in the top right corner?
     
    AloudWhisper, Dec 9, 2008 IP
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    jeramie78 Peon

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    #3
    To much white for my taste. I love how its clean and simple with no bull in it but for me the blue lettering against the white background makes my eyes hurt. Maybe change the link colors to better offset them from the white background.
     
    jeramie78, Dec 9, 2008 IP
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    #4
    nice domain name,
    it would be nice if i can register account.
     
    kaufen, Dec 9, 2008 IP
  5. Beautifun

    Beautifun Guest

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    #5
    Thanks for all your reviews.

    AloudWhisper: Not sure what you meant by the top right corner. I looked but there was nothing loading there. Did you mean the search box?

    jeramie78: We've tried to inject more colours, but white is our main because it's an information portal and there are lots of texts. But we'll see what we can do

    kaufen: Glad you like our domain name. Of course you could register here.
    Click here to register with us

    I'd appreciate any other feedbacks.
     
    Beautifun, Dec 10, 2008 IP
  6. aspire

    aspire Well-Known Member

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    #6
    I like the simplicity of the logo. Too much information on the landing page. Gives an impression of someone has scribbled a lot of information.
     
    aspire, Dec 10, 2008 IP
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    #7
    Too many colors and it's confusing, it's somewhat a "lost" design. You have a nice site to develop in there, so work on it and good luck. :)
     
    scubita, Dec 10, 2008 IP
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    L R Deeming Peon

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    #8
    Nice start but the blue against the white is hurting my eyes as well.
     
    L R Deeming, Dec 10, 2008 IP
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    #9
    If you add some negative space to the page it would make the layout look
    better it would be easier to read the text on the page.
     
    kingofsanda, Dec 10, 2008 IP
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    #10
    The site is okay. Well designed. Informative site.
     
    pinkdatsy, Dec 10, 2008 IP
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    moneyearn Peon

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    #11
    to much coloum. please make simple and easy to use or to see.
     
    moneyearn, Dec 10, 2008 IP