Adwords Copy that will Suck 'em In

Discussion in 'Google AdWords' started by myglyconutrientstore, May 27, 2008.

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    Here are a few examples of astounding ads for Google Adwords:

    {Keyword:Network Marketing Biz}
    Learn how You too can recruit 25
    New people every month just like us
    www.internet-network-marketing.net

    Business Opportunity
    {keyword:Start a Small Internet Business}
    Learn to Make 1K Month Part-Time
    www.MLM-Business-Opportunity.net

    Before Joining {keyword:Arbonne}
    Read how I made 7K last month by
    marketing ExpertPPC on the internet
    www.internet-network-marketing.net

    Before Joining {keyword:Arbonne}
    Read how I made 7K last month with
    our Proven Network Marketing Plan
    www.internet-network-marketing.net

    {keyword:MLM Training} Report
    Learn how You too can recruit 25
    New people every month just like us
    www.MagneticSponsoringOnline.com

    Note how we used the keyword variable feature in most of the title fields. Secondly we used the keywords that we were targeting both in the ads text and in the display url.

    Legal Notice: By internet law we own the copyright on these ads, your plagiarizing of them will not be tolerated. These ad serve to spark your own creativity.
     
    myglyconutrientstore, May 27, 2008 IP
  2. Masterful

    Masterful Well-Known Member

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    This is a joke, right? :confused:
     
    Masterful, May 28, 2008 IP
  3. Loud Mouth Soup

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    MLM? "Astounding"?


    Yeesh.

    Don't worry about me stealing your ads. I wouldn't touch that industry with a flamethrower.
     
    Loud Mouth Soup, May 28, 2008 IP
  4. FYI

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    Veeeeeery ingenious way to spam this forum with ads to your MLM sites :rolleyes:
     
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  5. Masterful

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    Your ads stink, dude, as do your sites and the validity of your 'legal notice'.
     
    Masterful, May 28, 2008 IP
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    Legal Notice: By internet law we own the copyright on these ads, your plagiarizing of them will not be tolerated. These ad serve to spark your own creativity.

    Lol, this is a great statement...

    I should start making thousands of posts claiming rights to ads and then attempt to sue people.

    But just so you know, those are the worst ads I have ever seen...
     
    robertpriolo, May 28, 2008 IP
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    I can do better than that and Ive just started using adwords 6 months ago.
     
    martyhoward, May 28, 2008 IP
  8. myglyconutrientstore

    myglyconutrientstore Active Member

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    I successfully used these ads for over a year. Maybe you all could share your work too.
     
    myglyconutrientstore, May 29, 2008 IP
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    unfortunately my work is confidential, and many other peoples work here is as well. This is a question many people are not going to answer and give away...

    But I have worked on clients such as public storage and fredericks of hollywood... if you want to name drop...
     
    robertpriolo, May 29, 2008 IP