Advice on this design.

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by Calabur, Aug 16, 2007.

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    http://fc04.deviantart.com/fs18/f/2007/224/c/c/Travel_Template_by_Calabur.jpg

    Just want some advice on it, I coded it, but I'm not the best coder, so I'm not showing that. :p
     
    Calabur, Aug 16, 2007 IP
  2. itssangy

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    not bad, but the header/logo is a little bit too big that it takes up almost half of the page already, other than that, it's nice.
     
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  3. mrcrowley

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    The design look really nice in my oppinion. It would be easier to comment on the design though if it was possible to interact with it. like the actual page.
     
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  4. Calabur

    Calabur Peon

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    http://lewis.vlexo.com/Index.html

    If you must. :p I told you it was horrible coding.

    And now that I think about it, the header is a bit big, thanks for pointing that out. :)

    Thanks for commenting. :)
     
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  5. Dan Schulz

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    Hey, that plane's scaring all the fish away! :D

    Seriously, the design looks good. The only thing I'd change (other than the height of the header for your interior pages if you haven't done so already) is to not use px for the text since Internet Explorer cannot resize it (believe it or not, despite what the CSS specification says, Microsoft is actually doing the right thing here).
     
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  6. clexmond

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    I like it, very fresh. However, I think I would change the header image a little. I don't think it would look bad with just the beach, or the plane in the sky. The superposition looks a little odd to me.
     
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  7. Aaron111

    Aaron111 Well-Known Member

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    try wc3.com:eek:
     
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  8. Stomme poes

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    I would change something in Destination and Date. If I want to go to Australia, do I put in my leaving date? My arrival date? "3 weeks in June"? What if I have double-jaw or any of that funky airplane option stuff?

    At the least, there should be something to say, day to be at destination... until...


    I love the plane over the beach. It catches my eye and seems well-integrated (doesn't look like a bad cut and paste job). The plane also tells me this is a plane-travel site, not just Joe's Vacations (by plane, train, boat, tours, blah).

    In your code, know that you don't need a div around everything. Only stuff that belongs together. Also, div's must be closed with </div>. It's not empty like <img> and <meta> tags. : )

    As Aaron said, w3schools can show you at least how to work the tags and what options they have with them.
     
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  9. Aaron111

    Aaron111 Well-Known Member

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    Aaron111, Aug 18, 2007 IP