Hi guys, Just wanna seek some advice on the sales letter on my page. www.instantslideup.com Any comment would be much appreciated. Thanks ! Rob
The copy had me going until you actually introduced the product. I tend to believe that words like revolutionary and crazy are mostly used by lazy copywriters and actually act as a turnoff. The element that bothered me most is the introduction of the price. You had managed to keep an engaging tone up until then. Otherwise I tip my hat towards the copywriter that wrote the sales letter. Great job! Hope this helps. Regards, George