A simple design

Discussion in 'HTML & Website Design' started by Rienk0r, Oct 8, 2007.

  1. #1
    Hello all,

    I'm new to the job of designer :D

    And I recently made a simple website,


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    Care to give me some feedback? ( still working on it though, maybe I could sell the PSD when finished? )

    Thanks in advance :)
     
    Rienk0r, Oct 8, 2007 IP
  2. AoN

    AoN Active Member

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    #2
    hmmm nice work :)
     
    AoN, Oct 8, 2007 IP
  3. Philvault

    Philvault Active Member

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    #3
    what does it do?
     
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  4. Rienk0r

    Rienk0r Peon

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    #4
    I have no clue yet what purpose it would serve.

    At first it was gonna be a Portfolio site for my school, but I got a better design now. Maybe I could sell it ?
     
    Rienk0r, Oct 8, 2007 IP
  5. alecrust

    alecrust Member

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    #5
    I doubt you could sell it. Too simple. You should slice it up, then I would be able to comment on your code.
     
    alecrust, Oct 8, 2007 IP
  6. kool-aid

    kool-aid Peon

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    #6
    your logo needs help. Text is too thin. The text + crown image should fill your sunburst thing more.
     
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    #7
    Cool design. So what's it for after showing it to school? Good luck!
     
    crazycatsville, Oct 8, 2007 IP
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    arabSquad Well-Known Member

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    #8
    simple and clean .. just my type of designs :D
    but also maybe you should work more on the logo .. take your time on it and dont rush yourself ;)
     
    arabSquad, Oct 8, 2007 IP
  9. WM7

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    #9
    You must have to do theme specific designs that will brush up your talent in right manner.
     
    WM7, Oct 9, 2007 IP
  10. Rienk0r

    Rienk0r Peon

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    #10
    Thanks all for the good comments!

    I'll get right on it!
     
    Rienk0r, Oct 10, 2007 IP
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    ecreate Peon

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    #11
    It's a good start for a first attempt. Read up on a few tutorials and try not to overdo the drop shadows (a common beginner mistake)
     
    ecreate, Oct 10, 2007 IP