I'm studying advertising here in africa. We got given a project to make a radio advert, so we work together with a copywriter and come up with a script and then produce the advert. I wonder if you could give me some thoughts on what you think of the script? This is for a website called Etraffic, they specialize in SEO. Sfx: *door opening and shutting* Mv01: Good day sir, great to see a customer. What can I get you? Mv02 (feeling bad): oh hi… uh… id like a… lemonade please. Mv01: Absolutely! Consider this one on the house. (pause) Its been a while since I've had someone through that door, ever since that old hotel found out how to get to the top of search engines on that internet thing. Anyway, How about free accommodation at our 5 star penthouse? Mv02: (pause) Sorry I’m actually looking for that old hotel... I thought this was it. Ann: Etraffic puts your business at number one, even if you aren’t. I also thought an American or European voice would sound quite fresh, so if you like the script maybe you could a go at voicing it. Thanks everyone! Looking forward to some feedback.
maybe this is not the best place to ask for it, why not try radiodaddy.com they offer free voice overs and jingles. Peter