A Header Review

Discussion in 'Websites' started by Martindale, Aug 16, 2007.

  1. #1
    I'm looking to get some reviews and suggestions for the header (everything in <head>, too) on one of my sites, RolePlayGateway.

    I was looking over ProBlogger's How To Draw StumbleUpon Users Into Your Blog post, and I've been giving some serious thought to improving, at the very least, my header.

    Our target market is roleplayers, you know, the really geeky people who pretend to be someone else for fun. Any and all reviews are helpful - but probably would be more accurate if you have a familiarity with the field.

    Thanks in advance!
     
    Martindale, Aug 16, 2007 IP
  2. projectx

    projectx Active Member

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    #2
    It looks good i stuck wright away reading, that mean its good:) keep going.
    I ilke the layout not to musch jibba jabba, clean the way i like it.
     
    projectx, Aug 16, 2007 IP
  3. lojadeluxo

    lojadeluxo Well-Known Member

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    #3
    You logo not look good.. You need to make it "more clean"...
    A simple logo i´ll be better!
     
    lojadeluxo, Aug 16, 2007 IP
  4. Martindale

    Martindale Well-Known Member

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    Thanks for the input, guys. Anyone else have anything to say?
     
    Martindale, Aug 18, 2007 IP
  5. Sana Hayat

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    #5
    i think logo seems well.i like it.
     
    Sana Hayat, Aug 21, 2007 IP
  6. Martindale

    Martindale Well-Known Member

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    Thanks, Sana. :)

    I'm considering removing the Bookmark It applet. It's not very helpful, to be honest.
     
    Martindale, Aug 21, 2007 IP
  7. Martindale

    Martindale Well-Known Member

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    Okay, so I've removed the applet completely. Most roleplayers aren't into social news/bookmarking (yet, atleast), so for my sort of niche, these extra items are not useful.

    I've adjusted our description to be much more keyword rich, as well. This should generate much more organic traffic (the best kind of traffic ;)) over the next few months.
     
    Martindale, Aug 29, 2007 IP
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    RahulSeo Banned

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    #8
    I think logo is not good ...
    Nice layout & good work....
    good luck.
     
    RahulSeo, Aug 30, 2007 IP
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    Hi Martindale,

    If anything - I think the header (viewed in conjunction with the rest of the site) comes across as a little corporate.

    As an ex-role-player - my hobby was very much about escapism - about wanting to be somewhere or be something else. Nothing in the header is communicating that to me at the moment.

    I would look at using more distinctive colours - or at least including an image-based accent that communicates that same sense of adventure.

    Dylan
     
    Dylan Tovey, Aug 30, 2007 IP
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    feeldesigns Banned

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    #10
    good logo..and good layout ..but the content background color is not matching for the header..
     
    feeldesigns, Aug 30, 2007 IP
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    header is cool and all site also cool
    nice work dude
     
    apkapio, Aug 30, 2007 IP
  12. Martindale

    Martindale Well-Known Member

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    Thanks all around! Keep the feedback coming.
     
    Martindale, Aug 30, 2007 IP
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    #13
    You have a ton of scripts and lots of styles all over the place in the <head> section, also a lot of meta tags that probably aren't needed.

    Change the TITLE!!!!! (meta tag)

    Description is way too long ...

    Logo needs sort of blurry, like the black has been smashed together.

    Other than that, not bad.
     
    BottomUpSites, Aug 30, 2007 IP
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    gathersuccess Well-Known Member

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    site is cool =)
     
    gathersuccess, Aug 30, 2007 IP
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    Nice clean lines and design. Good luck!
     
    DealWorx, Aug 30, 2007 IP
  16. aceonline

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    #16
    First of all if you wanna attract those (as you say geeks :p ) you need to change your layout /theme/skin . Coz you are using the default theme which is not bad but not that good for your site. Also as said above , try and change your logo.

    Regards,
    Ace.
     
    aceonline, Aug 30, 2007 IP