I had a client whose company makes windows. He told me he needed a creative and provocative advert designed for some newspaper advertising. They turned this (attached image) down in favor of some boring corporate looking ad. So much for being provocative. Was our design too creative for an ad, you reckon ?
Hmm.. okay.. I was creative head of a small ad agency.. and what I see here is an idea.. not entirely finished and thought through.. first of all, if I were the company I wouldn't want to lose my corporate albeit boring image.. and I'm betting they aren't trying to sell the concept of windows.. they want to actually sell designer windows.. right? No offense but if I were your client I'd turn you down too... nothing is original about the idea.. nothing stands out.. and what would the copy on the ad say? Sorry but everything is vague. How long have you been in this business?