$85 Simple Design Contest (Newsletter Sign up Box - Everything Provided)

wow, thanks for the fast feedback, happy that u liked it.
here it is another 2

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thanks

 

Hi








please give some feedback.....................

 

Here is my revision

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/9828/newsteller3copy.png

Please leave a feedback
Thanks!

 

I'll be giving more detailed feedback shortly - but as a note to everyone LESS IS MORE - please don't try to overcomplicate the designs - Something that looks great but also simple will probably win this.

 

revised ver

 

other try..!!

 

wait.i want to do some revision

 

This is my revision

1st version


2nd version

 

some more try...






how it looks to website:
http://unlock-all-motorola.com/css/css/oilcprice/website-embed.jpg

feedback please...

 

revised ver :

 

with a little changes



feedback appreciated.

 

my try..

 

thanks for choosing me as one of top 3.

here is my first revision design

hope you will like it

vineet

 

here is my 2nd revision design.

hope you will like it.

vineet

 

here is my 3rd revision design.

hope you will like one of my 3 revised designs.

feedback welcomed.

vineet

 

here it it is more light with different colors.

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Okay guys – just under 3 hours to go until Competition end.
FEEDBACK:

Warpser – Thanks for the entry – it’s clean and fresh – but it just doesn’t make it into the top 3.

Allofall – these are very nice and professional looking designs – the sign up box is great – You are Joint 1st

Photoshoppie – Thanks for your entry. I like the shade of red you have used in: Click here to learn more – but the design really doesn’t go with the site.

Bodil4o – Thanks for making the revision – it just isn’t right for the site though – but I do like what you did with the sign up now button – the sheen is pretty cool.

Biruhato – Great – very little else to say – Simple/Professional and clean – a great design – you are joint 1st

Hpgraphic – Thanks for the entry – sadly it doesn’t fit with the site – it also seems a little busy. But it is very creative design.

Mukhlis92 – It looks really nice – simple and professional – again – the ticks are great. You make it into the top 5 with the design.

Jnjnnino – Thanks for the revisions – you are also top 5 (you may also jump a few places as the bottom design is great. I’ll need to think about it a bit more.

Masjacky – Thanks for the entry – Sadly It really doesn’t fit in with the site – it does stand out though 

Vinpkl – Your third design is my favourite – you are currently in 3rd place, but could jump. I just need to do more thinking. The one issue I have is that it looks a bit busy and not simple enough.

So the 2 joint leaders are:

Allofall – design 78 (blue) – Would be good if the design was a little more simplistic and the top stood out more.

Biruhato – design 71

I also wanted to mention that I have just started 2 other competitions – so I hope you guys will get a chance to enter (the first is related to this Comp) The threads are:
http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=1644191

http://forums.digitalpoint.com/showthread.php?t=1644219

 

Ok but what can I improve?

 

thanks for feedback.

here is new revision design 1

hope you will like it

vineet