$85 Simple Design Contest (Newsletter Sign up Box - Everything Provided)

my revision


with blue color

 

here's my revision



Feedback please

 

Professional, clean, structured with readings levels. The information is very easy to ready and yet nice. It's not just plain text. I hope you like it!

 

thanks for ur pm..!!

 

here is my entry.

feedback is welcomed.

also tell that you will be announcing winner at 6PM GMT or 6AM GMT Friday.

vineet

 

Hello, here is mine:

on the site:

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thanks

 

here is my second entry

hope you will like my first or second entry.

feedback is welcomed.

if you like my designs please send me a PM.

thanks

vineet

 

4th Try

I changed the colors to tie you to the site. I added and a ruler / that is blue /
Please leave a feedback

 

here is my third design in red and grey.

hope you wil like one of my 3 designs.

feedback is welcomed.

vineet

 

i try to make it simple and readable

no clip art
100 vector

feedback very appreciated
thank you

 

here is my 4th design in green and grey.

hope you will like one of my 4 designs.

feedback welcomed.

If you like any of my design pls send me a PM also.

vineet

 

A bit detailed feedback may help ??

anyways here is my design with mods.....




Regards

 

Okay Guys here’s some more feedback.

Now this is a note to everyone: The Green Sadly doesn’t seem to be working for me – it’s just too obvious.
Also a lot of the designs are a bit too strong on colour – a strong border is great – but too much colour detracts from the text in the advert.

I’ll give the top 3 designs after the general feedback.

Jninnino – It’s very neat and fresh – I really do like it – but for some reason it just doesn’t fit – there could be too much colour.

Renderwork – I love your designs – Professional – crisp and it calls to action. The top 2 designs are really interesting – is it possible to have them less colourful as it’s difficult to see the text – a strong border would be good – but less is more where the text is. I would also like to see some additional colours as the green is nice – but I’m not sure it’s a good fit. You are in the top 3 

Biruhato: I do like this design – you’ve kept it clean and not filled the text space with colour – which helps the text stand out. The one complaint is with the bullet points – the colour and structure is pretty weak – can you make the bullet points stand out more and try a different colour. I do like the blue version below more than the other. You are in the top 3 

Mukhlis92 – The design is good and I LOVE what you have done with the ticks – that is perfect as it makes the text stand out – which is EXACTLY what I’m looking for. I think this is where the green is best – for the ticks and bullet points.
Sadly the rest of the design just isn’t working

Zeba5 – Thanks for the entry – it looks professional – but it just doesn’t fit in with the site.

Hpgraphic – Thanks for the entry – sadly the colours don’t work and it’s just too plain.

Vinpkl – This is a great design! I prefer your third entry – post 49 – It stands out and looks very professional. The sign up box is a bit too big and overpowering though – can you do something with this? Also This newsletter is essential reading for (part) doesn’t seem to fit – actually the whole central section needs a bit of work. But still it’s very nice. You are in the top 3 

Allofall – GREAT colouring – it’s subtle yet very attractive – The whole thing – going from a light shade to darker- sadly the central part with the bullet points is weak – which is such a shame. It would be good to see the same style applied to different colours – if you can do this and work on the central part you could fly into the lead.

Universal4o – Thankyou for your new entry – sadly it’s the whole structure of the design that isn’t working.

HerDish – Thanks for your entry – Sadly it’s just not right for the site.
This competition is wide open - There is still plenty of time – winner to be announced on Friday at 18:00 GMT.

Raman Gulia - i like the structure of the design - it's well spaced and the information is easy to distinguish and read. I really don't like the colour though.

So the top 3 designs are (In no particular order)

Vinpkl – post 49
Biruhato – post 41
Renderwork – post 39

 

ok let me redo it

 

Wait for my 5th entry ...

 

I will post a revised entry soon, too!

 

Hi, this is my submission.
I'm not saying you have to love the purple, just wanted to show something different. Colors can be changed, of course.

 

thanks for the feedback, here it is with different colors:

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thanks

 

Here's my revised entry!
Feedback is greatly appreciated!

 

Okay Guys – some more feedback:

Lejka – It’s really interesting – I Love the green stars for the bullet points. Also the colour of the Sign Up Now box is perfect. Also the position of the Click here to learn more box is perfect. The problem is it’s just a bit too long – there is too much space and something weird about it – Still it has A LOT going for it.

Allofall – these are great! The position of the sign up box section is PERFECT – very professional design. You have everything there I’m after I’m not too keen on the position of the click here to learn more box – it could be somewhere else.
Also the bullet points are a bit weak – I like the green – but they need to be away from the edge as ticks Shiny bullet points – something to help bring peoples attention to the text.
Would I be possible to see you do the same with red?
Also lighten the background behind the text even more (as I really need people to focus on the content.
Anyway it’s a fantastic design and you are now in the TOP 3.

Robi – Thanks for making the revision- it really is an interesting design – but it still looks a bit disjointed – like it’s telling a few different messages.

So Allofall is now in the top 3

I just want to say that the standard here is superb and I am delighted with the turnout and the array of designs – Thanks Dp’ers