I have more feedback to share, but first I want to clarify something and make a couple of general notes. And I’m thrilled with all the entries and to see so much talent! First, I noticed on a couple of threads that some designers are getting “stiffed†out of their payment. I just want you to know that I will be happy to pay once I approve the final design and BEFORE you send it to me, if that would make you more comfortable. So, no worries about payment! Second, I’d love to see something more interesting in the font. And maybe try “Marketing†in a thinner font, because the emphasis is on “More in Storeâ€. Third, as far as color is concerned – you can use the requested RGB: 51,0,153, as well as black or a matching shade of blue. As long as it is just black and blue, or a couple of blues. Fourth, check out the feedback I’ve left for others. It may give you some ideas! OK, on to feedback: @IM3D – I like the graph/arrow in the first “O†and the LLC in the circle. I think having a graphic in both “Oâ€â€™s is too much – I’d like one central thing to focus on. Also, can you take the rectangle off “Marketing†and try a more modern font? @matchstick – I don’t like the carrot over the “Eâ€s and the LLC is definitely too large. I like that you incorporated two different fonts, but I personally don’t like either one. I like the upper and lower case, and that the “in†is a little smaller. Can you try some different fonts, make the LLC smaller, and right justify “Marketing, LLCâ€. @shortbus408 – I like the arrow going up in the first “Oâ€. Can you stick with the requested color of RGB: 51,0,153. You can use the blue and black, because that will still constitute a one color printing. The LLC is too large, and please don’t alternate colors in a word. I don’t like the down arrow in the second “O†– it’s not the image I want to portray. I’d also like more emphasis on the “More in Store†than on the “Marketingâ€, so I don’t want the “marketing†quite that large. @watari – I really like your first design, can you make some changes to that one? Can you remove the globe and the boxes, but keep everything else (including the line below – I really like the line). Can you also make the LLC smaller? And can I see it in white with a black background? @XFactorLogo – I like your second design - can we work with that one? Can you make the “Marketing†smaller – I’d like the emphasis to be on “More in Store†rather than the “Marketingâ€. @brahman_namharb – Let’s work with the first design. There’s a little too much going on here. Can you make the LLC smaller? Can “Marketing†be upper and lower case and smaller, and make the “A†normal? @rancari – There’s really nothing here that ‘pops’ for me. If you’d like to take a look at some of the feedback I’ve offered others, maybe you could come up with something else? @Imba.Unknown – “More in Store†needs to be on one line, “Marketing†can be on the second line. I feel like putting the “LLC†in the “O†emphasizes it, and I really want the LLC small and unobtrusive. Can you also try jazzing it up a little with the font? @MYND – Let’s work with the first design on your first entry. The star over the “in†is nice. I’d like the underline all the way across and not just under the words. Can you make the LLC smaller? Also, I don’t like the font on “Marketing†– it doesn’t seem to work with the “more in store†font. How about trying the font you used for “marketing†in the 2nd entry, first design?
Logo Proposition for MORE IN STORE MARKETING LLC .......................................................................
I just want to let everyone know that I've had a family emergency and will be back to post feedback tomorrow. Thanks for your patience! ~Stephanie
My idea was to create a shopping cart representing the stores, and the globe on top for global marketing. It became a character by accident.
More feedback – thanks for your patience! @Matchstick – Thanks for resubmitting. I still think there’s way too much going on here, but thanks for your efforts. @brahman_namharb – Thanks for resubmitting. You did clean it up quite a bit, but there’s still no real focal point for me here. Thanks for your efforts. @Gorgon – Thanks for resubmitting. I actually prefer your first design over this second one, but neither is really what I’m looking for. Thank you! @rancari –Thanks for resubmitting. You did add some interest and I appreciate your efforts. However, this is not what I’m looking for. Thank you! @tnt-tek – Thank you for entering! I like this. Can I see a couple of changes? Can you make the “Marketing†not quite so tall (take off about ¼ of the height). The color for “Moreâ€, “Store†and “LLC†is a little too purple for my taste. Can it be bluer? Can you also change the square so it is just behind “inâ€? Thanks! @watari – your design is definitely one of the front-runners. Can you make a couple of changes? It should be “LLCâ€, not “LCCâ€. Can you make the dot over the “i†in “in†a star perhaps? I think the circle makes it look like a shopping bag and I don’t have an ecommerce site. Thanks! @MYND – Thanks so much for resubmitting. I can tell you put a lot of effort into this, however, these designs are not what I’m looking for. Thank you for your effort! @IM3D – Thank you for resubmitting. Can you show me a change on your first design (post #33)? Can you just show me a different font – something a little rounder (like Fertigo)? Thanks! @coolwanz – Thanks for your submission. Can you take out the “TMâ€? I like your use of color in the middle one. Can you underline “More in Store†with a paintbrush type effect? Thanks! @untitledstudios – Thank you for your submission. Can you make a couple of changes? Please remove the shopping cart. Can you dot the “i†in “in†with a “world†graphic (a different one – this one looks a little like a basketball)? Please change the color to RGB: 51,0,153. Please remove the period after the “LLC†and remove the comma after “Marketingâ€. The “Marketing†and “LLC†font are OK, but can you change the “More in Store†font to something a little rounder and upper and lower case (as long as the fonts don’t compete with each other)? I would still love to see edits from XFactorLogo, jokerlilia and Ariestoteles. Hope you didn’t disappear! So far, the frontrunners are (in no particular order): watari, XFactorLogo, jokerlilia (PM), Ariestoteles, IM3D and tnt-tek. But keep in mind that any of the changes I’ve requested or any new entries can quickly take the lead! Thanks everyone!
I really preferred your original font (second design in post #16). Can you go back to the original design and just make 'marketing' smaller (at least not so tall)? Thanks!