TDGraphics...well, that's pretty literal based on my last feedback. That bit of grass may be too similar... ;-) The font is better...both of them. Work suggest working with it a bit... ScarletWolfe...yes, the font is important...wouldn't you say? It looks like yo picked up the same grass as TDGraphics (see comments above) I applaud your trying to narrow down a font... I am definitely not a font expert...but I know a good logo/font when I see one. (IMO) Let's see... #1-fairly generic...can't rule out 100% #2-no, #3-no, #4-no ...next post... #1-no, #2-maybe if paired with some visual?(3 icon idea?), #3-no, #4-no
TDGraphics...re: 3-icon idea...yes...but it needs a lot of work. Field icon...needs to be unique...Day icon...more than just a circle, maybe ad some rays...Gifts icon...not a fan of the tag, maybe switch it out with a present/gifts-wrapped package. Ariestoteles...form a purely visual standpoint, one of the best yet. Remember to get the "s" in there at the end of "Gifts". The font is interesting...could work. The grass looks a bit "sloppy" (for lack of a better description). I like the way the sun is integrated...the gift package looks forced into there (not needed?) Worth developing a bit...
IQdesigns...in general, not what I am looking for. The grass(?) at the beginning and end don't work. Not a fan of that particular font either. I encourage you to review some of the prior submitted designs and feedback provided. Looking forward to your future submissions.
OK I guess you didnt like the first attempt,hope you'll like the 2nd one . Feedback will be appriciated. Regards, IQ.
IQdesigns...the most obvious issue is the font...the suns rays may be to large for my taste. The colors are ok...as I know they can be modified fairly easily.
Ariestoteles... I'd like to see the font by itself. I think the grass element is not working for it...seems too sharp/spiky. Maybe try a silohuette of grass (ie. my demo logo on the site). The ribbon/bow is an interesting idea (and your implementation is done very well)...but it's not working. Looking forward to seeing more...thank you for your effort thus far.
Ok, I received your Email and I think I'll give it a try! My entry: I hope you like it Thanks for the opportunity.
(Sorry guys...I thought my feedback got posted last night) libertygone...I/we (my wife and I) like #4 the best. I realize that #3 and #4 are the same except for the reflection. Let's work on these...first, the grass element needs some work. Right now it looks like big plant leaves...think more along the lines of tall, thin grass (whispy grass in a field). Second...the sun is appearing too green. I look forward to your revisions on this one. You clean crispness simplicity of your design works well. I'd like to encourage you to also submit additional concpepts. IQdesigns...This concept is still not working for me. I'd like to encourage you to develop a new concept. mioo...Thank you for the entries...althoguh creative concepts...they simply aren't right for this project. I encourage you to also submit new concepts. Ariestoteles...Again, the grass isn't working on the F. (see grass comment for libertgone above) Maybe pull the (modified) grass element off to the left? Or even remove it all together? Remove the gift package all together...it's not required. The color scheme within the font and gradient is good...although it's verging on a bit too dark overall. Can the dark color be lightened up a bit? Finally...I like why you are trying with the header background...that works well. Don't give up on this one yet...let's see where we can take it. Your skills are obviously good...I encourage you to submit additional entries.