Contest $75 - Logo Contest - CruikshankGroup.com - 72 Hours

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  1. killerdesign

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    #21
    Another Building block idea, plus typography changes... A suggestive letter "C" is added...

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  2. jward

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    #22
    @Nivedhithan:

    Thank-you for your submission. I like that you went with the CG symbol idea. There are some issues with the logo though. The green colors do not match (text versus symbol). The symbol itself does not look very crisp. It does look very similar to some of the earlier submissions.

    @killerdesign:

    Great improvements. The one that captures my eye is the first one for some reason. The one I find most interesting is the 2nd.

    The only issue with it might be that the symbol actually looks like several things. It looks like a tie, a zipper, a compass, pacman, a football helmet, a fish, and/or a dolphin. =)

    Being that the founder is a Florida resident, and a football fan, he may like that it looks like a helmet and also the compass. ;) I'll see what he thinks.

    Thank-you so much for all of the submissions. If you have a moment, I would be interested in seeing the colors taken from these image applied to the 2nd image. If you are short on time, that's ok. =)

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  3. killerdesign

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    #23
    Less pacman like...

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    #24
    just realized its almost the same concept with watari design.. i hope it wouldn't be trouble

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    #25
    Requested scheme...

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    Another

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    #26
    http://titikcerah.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/cg1.jpg


    http://titikcerah.files.wordpress.com/2010/05/cg2.jpg


    hi jward,

    this my logo design for your cruikshank groups.
    i give an integrity feels from this logo by a rigid shape. this logo means is with many shape that have different colours, cruikshank groups can unite that by the circle. integrity is a tools thats bring us to quality.
    i can costumize then if you would.


    hope you like this quality logo jward :)
    hope u like. feeds hardly recommended .
     

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  7. Rovil

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    #27
    Check this
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    #28
    my revision here

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    #29
    I would chnge the colors and feel of the logo if u like the concept...

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  10. Chewysmom

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    #30
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    #31
    will work on another concept
     
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  12. jward

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    #32
    @killerdesign: #23

    I think changing the angle of the compass worked really well. Great idea.

    @jtoms: #24

    I like your logo. It has more of an engineering feeling. The owner is an engineer and expert project manager in the industry and may like this when he sees it. =)

    @killerdesign: #25

    The first recolor would need to have some black inside the icon to imitate the Saint's colors.

    I actually like the 2nd recolor, although I was not sure I would. In Florida, those are extremely recognizable colors and that could make for a logo that really gets attention. It might be interesting to try it with "Cruikshank Group" in black. However, we can try this if you are selected as the winner. You have been amazing with your willingess to provide edits so far.

    @metz_wasil: #26

    I am not sold on the symbol part yet. I don't think all those colors will work. However, I love the font you selected for "Cruikshank Group". Very strong choice.

    It might be interesting to see if you can adapt the colorful symbol to just have a few colors (taken from the 1st or 2nd football helmet, see above). And to see if you have any luck placing the compass style symbol perhaps inside this circle of integrity.

    @Rovil: #27

    Your logo does standout as having a construction feeling to it. I, for some reason, think of a lumberyard. Maybe it is the use of greens and the work building, but it captures that vibe. Overall, I'm not sure the symbol or the font choices are strong enough in comparison to some of the others at this stage.

    @DevilishBoy: #28

    Amazing improvement! This is way better than your earlier design. The symbol is simple, but elegant. You used the Saint's color pattern in a great way. And the text looks very good. I like this and I suspect the founder may as well. You might want to try lightening the color of the black line separating the symbol from the text.

    @Mogambo: #29

    The symbol does look interesting. Changes would include: New color scheme, center the symbol over the text, improve the strength of the font (fuzzy edges now).

    @Chewysmom: #30/31

    Of your submissions, I like the 1st one (blue/gray) best. It's a different color selection than we have seen so far, but it stands out well. Many of the submissions we have that are too green dominated have not worked well. I think we were hoping for the green to be more of a strong single element or constrast color, rather than overwhelming the entire logo. You've taken a conservative approach with the symbol, and it could work. However, I'm not sure the C and the G are immediately detectable (at a glance). That takes away from the symbol a bit.
     
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  13. Mogambo

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    #33
    Thank you for the feedback.... Working on it nw
     
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    watari Well-Known Member

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    #34
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    #35
    @watari:

    I like the new color scheme.

    @all: The founder says that he really likes the ones that have the Saint's colors. =)
     
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    #36
    another try
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    #37
    @Chewysmom:

    Really liking this color combo. This version makes a bold impact. I'll wait for feedback from the founder see if he likes the bolder approach. I like the bold font. Might be curious to see other font options, and whether the text could be make more crisp looking. Has some fuzzy edges.
     
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    #38
    thanks for feedback
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    #39
    Requested updates....

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    #40
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