Wataro and NeilPharnam are on track. Still looking for that oomf, web 2.0 feel examples include: http://static.flickr.com/27/101793493_de7c112c42_o.jpg http://www.jeffro2pt0.com/images/web20logos.jpg
Xaralee: Ths is unreal! definitely on track now! Try the S P A C E as white and the little stars as black. Jackie The third one would be the better of the 3. But not the colours im after and a little too plain.
Xaralee: If possible, try to compact the letter-spacing. To make it more 'cuter' if that makes sense. Also the white 'chromey' part in the background instead of the blue hue, just try grays.
Xaralee: Could you try on a solid black background, and remove the outer-glow. Thanks! Jackie: I quite like this, but it's missing something.. not sure
Xaralee: I really need the Snazzy to be more bunched together so it's not as wide. and then rotate it anti clock-wise about 25-30 degrees.
xaralee: Those screenshots do nothing for me mate sorry. They don't suit the layout.. and on an angle to put it simply, looks no good. JVHarris: I like the bottom left one. Can we try bunch the text up a bit, close the letter spacing in, make the pink fluoro say a hex of #ff00b4 and try incorporate some black. maybe make the "snazzy" black and the Space white. Try removing the gradient from the text too, so its just plain white. Also can I see this on a plain black background.
Can you show me this one without the angle and make the S P A C E and stars black. and remove the white overlay wavey thing over the SNAZZY.
Can we try a real 5 point star shape on the P and bunch the letters up. there too gappy. Looking good tho!